...fuck wit me.

voidformula · 01-30-2013, 10:51 PM

Favorite part was;

take these rhymes as they meant to be, fine intricate keys..
divine as da vinci unleashed, derived from the sickest of inks

Thought that was pretty smooth.

It got a bit hard to flow around 2/3rds of the way through but picked back up in the end. I think it was mainly the engines line that threw me off. I'm sure if I re-read it a few times I could understand your scheme a bit better for that part, I'm just basing off first read-through.

01-30-2013, 10:51 PM	#2
voidformula Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 37 Rep Power: 38	Favorite part was; take these rhymes as they meant to be, fine intricate keys.. divine as da vinci unleashed, derived from the sickest of inks Thought that was pretty smooth. It got a bit hard to flow around 2/3rds of the way through but picked back up in the end. I think it was mainly the engines line that threw me off. I'm sure if I re-read it a few times I could understand your scheme a bit better for that part, I'm just basing off first read-through.