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Old 07-08-2013, 02:20 AM   #20
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look that hood talk is'nt for you, philly wasnt born goon
if your ever seen with crips, its on the access ramp to your fucking dorm room
Reminds me of that South Park episode, kind of not in a good way though since that was the wordplay for an entire episde. Iffy opener.
college books dont go with common crooks, that mentality runs the world cus
i mean if ur sailing drugs, its on a beer floating across the top of a girls cup
Good if you meant running drugs on boats, bad if you meant selling/sailing, though.
shit son, u dont hold big guns, or do well wit tha pimpin
cuz we know if ur ever seen wit a beretta, its cuz ud go to jail for them chickens
Not feeling, too obscure for me.
plus u dont lose cuz u no show, so your name is a fools tactic
no ones scared of a bully, who doesnt show up for the fight after school faggot
This is a good personal and true (Blue Bayou fire verse in Fight Night?), but wording at the end was lazy (faggot). I guess going for harshness maybe (seems to be your style), but not my cup.
ur whole rep is ruined, u dont give swirlies or pop nines
so when i school this kid, u'll go from an online bully to looking like one from columbine
Cool, kind of played, though. Columbine/school and school this good. Multie is off, too.
ur another dude who likes to pretend, have a seat its time to begin
u'll probably think im ur new doctor phil, when i walk away wit ur wife at the end
[B]I can't give this props. I used Doctor Phil against Philly on RB in like '07, so 6 years ago. And voters didn't even like it then (although he was probably rode, to be fair).
to recap ur a fake dealer, n u duck anyone whats got u rattled
so the real diss to me in this match, woudl be u actually showing up to the battle
This is hard-hitting, but kind of a self-diss/backfire since he did indeed show up.
i just murdered this pussy, so fuck you and that lame ass motto, b
you drink a monster every night to cram for exams, ur girl does it erytime she swallows me
I like this closer, reminds me of Hens' 3 Slashes on the Can like Monster Energy line in Summer Classic III, but obviously different wordplay.

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My killer code is take enemies & their families down, so son you better pray
Cuz the only killer code you got...is for a shitty PC game that no one'll ever play
Good personal opener.
Yea you know the vets in this, and it's cool to show respect but shit...
I'll be frank...you're known for swallowing more weiners than Joey Chestnut did
Just said the be frank cliche is played as fuck, this was worded well, though.
Say you're doin work... I doubt it. You act like your net-worth breaks thousands
If u EVER seen bags full a cake...he musta uploaded pics from his birthday outing
This was a good current event personal line. Interchangable with God of War and Oneduh.
Homie you ain't tight, your a bum. A terrible father, with that wife who's a dud
So when I kill em, God willing... just a thousand useless online rap sites to his son
Pretty good and hard-hitting personal nameplay.
I'm a bully & alltime great pal, got plenty of belts that I don't need to flash on display clown
u keep urs in the closet...pre-tied for erry time some1 says u aint good & u start havin a breakdown
This is on the line for too statementish for me. Hard-hitting none the less.
Afraid of germs, inside all day? These kinda things should not assimilate with men
This guy would NEVER sit on a John in public...unless he was out on a dinner date wit Hens
Played word/nameplay and I just said these type of lines are overused in the Cash battle. I did like the flip, though.
Raised a son, now try to grow a life. See I toss stacks to dimes that's down to blow tonight
You throw chips at ya chick... only when ya pissed that ur computer-building ain't goin right
This was good. Honestly thought you'd take it in another direction, unexpected. Even better. Personal, too.
He was a God in this bitch... back before Father Time came & robbed him of wit
Now spruce it up all ya want but the quality's shit...
ur writin verses these days like makin Ramen with Strikt
Too obscure for me, so you both cancel eachother out on those.


Overall I got Philly. Thought his concepts were better. Ron had crips which is an old wordplay since that South Park episode years old and that was the running joke for the whole episode. Not sure about the sailing/selling. I'll give him the benefit of the doubt and assume he didn't mean that, so that was good. Beretta was too obscure for me. Wasn't liking the wording on Bully at the end. I thought the personal hit hard, though. Columbine/school a bit of an old concept as well. I know everyone thought Dr. Phil was dope, but for ME it was ancient. Not a big deal. I've seen lines in most peoples verses this tournament that I used/seen mad years ago get called amazing. Probably been doing this too long. Diss to me now that I look at it again wasn't that creative, was somewhat hard-hitting though on both parties. Monster was probably one his best lines. Philly had killer code which was a strong personal and good concept. Bags full of cake was a good current event line. Be frank is a played cliche, but good wording. God willing was another strong personal and good concept. Closet was a bit statementish, but hard-hitting. John was old with good flip. Chips was another good concept/personal line. Closer was obscure for me. Like I said, Philly just had the better concepts here and had some good wording to make even his older lines hit a bit. GoW had some old lines, too, but his were hard for me to give props to. They were old lines that were more unforgivable than Philly's for me. Overall Philly just came correct here. GoW's strong suit is harsh/hard-hitting punches. Philly's is more creativity. I thought Philly's creativity outshown GoW's harshness here. If they rematch, it could be the other way around. Props to both.

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