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01-30-2013, 07:33 PM
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u critiqued urself perfectly. it started off dope and tailed off as it when it along. I bet its because you spent more time on the first few bars. I do the same thing. but ya if your not happy with the piece don't post it. work on it more. cause this had a lot of potential. as it is. I liked it. just didn't like seeing the skill level take a downward turn. anyway good stuff. keep droppin
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