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Old 07-07-2013, 05:20 AM   #7
Rawn M.D.
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I agree with what pretty much everyone above.
This read really smoothly, and i truly enjoyed some of the word association that went down..ie: wolfs clothing/cover her fears, love triangle/square.
also some of those quick similies along with brief metas came off more effective in this structure then normally: a throwaway like a condom is, meaningless hotel rooms/never check out of
those were just some of the high notes to this in my eyes.
I did enjoy the concise nature of this, felt u both said a lot using very few words, which is dope to me.
Also the tone seemed authentic and genuine.
and when the ideas bled they did so very smoothly.

Nice post
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