Lecture vs. Gazette - {Lecture wins}

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@Lecture @Gazette

[Lecture]

I'm done with my verse.
I went 10, will post after you drop.


links:
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=8267
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=8263
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=8266
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=8268
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=8264

[Gazette]

check, 10's fine

[Gazette]

Started reading your clash with Atomic, that was some stupid textin' son
Less of a verse, more a 'collection of words', so I had to conclude that 'Lec's a con'
You used a flow / menstrual cycle pun ... yh, ocks scriptin' is real fine
Intrigue me Lec, what will we be seeing next? A 'box flip' or 'da feet' line?
This aint a fair fight, I'll fuckin' punch you to death bitch
At least lookin' at a battery charge the way I run through 'a Lec trick'
Avy says he's from Jupiter, a planet with a quarter mass that is helium
So when you rap like a little girl, do you fall back on that as your reasoning?
I'll finish up here though. And I think that you ought to see
It aint that I'm 'running outta class' - you're just a Lecture that's borin' me

pce

[Lecture]

This hyena prolly thinks hes a cheetah, believes hes pickin up speed, well
you ain't the carnivore type so eatin me wont ever happen all I see is Gazelles
I could diss your ugly fucking mug, but I'm sure that would be little of me
cause clearly roastin you ain't shit the whole sites already done it.. literally
This is big time vs little league I dont care what rabbit you pull out the hat
in the BA you got your ass kicked by Atomic... & no I have no punch for that
You be bitchin & complainin, freepostin & swayin, sayin' your dope your lyin
you remind me of other pussy ass niggas on this site & I don't Battle Hymens
Enough with the chit chat on with the click clack cause I aint with speakin
I'll run up in G-Spot & get the trigger finger moving & leave this pussy leakin

Somethin light.

[Undead.]

GAZETTE

Started reading your clash with Atomic, that was some stupid textin' son
Less of a verse, more a 'collection of words', so I had to conclude that 'Lec's a con'

ehh kinda comes off forced a bit, ur wordin is whats makin it have that feel. not bad

You used a flow / menstrual cycle pun ... yh, ocks scriptin' is real fine
Intrigue me Lec, what will we be seeing next? A 'box flip' or 'da feet' line?

No...this isn't a punch its a question.

This aint a fair fight, I'll fuckin' punch you to death bitch
At least lookin' at a battery charge the way I run through 'a Lec trick'

ehh creative...but still idk seems a tad forced for my liking per say. this was OK

Avy says he's from Jupiter, a planet with a quarter mass that is helium
So when you rap like a little girl, do you fall back on that as your reasoning?

ehhh,,stop questioning start punching

I'll finish up here though. And I think that you ought to see
It aint that I'm 'running outta class' - you're just a Lecture that's borin' me

ok the best bar imo from u


LECTURE

This hyena prolly thinks hes a cheetah, believes hes pickin up speed, well
you ain't the carnivore type so eatin me wont ever happen all I see is Gazelles

too bad his name is gazette...no NP points loser. but this is corny to me srry makes me think of the old "lion through ur teeth!" quip

I could diss your ugly fucking mug, but I'm sure that would be little of me
cause clearly roastin you ain't shit the whole sites already done it.. literally

ehh personal..

This is big time vs little league I dont care what rabbit you pull out the hat
in the BA you got your ass kicked by Atomic... & no I have no punch for that

LOL...at the losing to atomic & no punch for that

You be bitchin & complainin, freepostin & swayin, sayin' your dope your lyin
you remind me of other pussy ass niggas on this site & I don't Battle Hymens

ok

Enough with the chit chat on with the click clack cause I aint with speakin
I'll run up in G-Spot & get the trigger finger moving & leave this pussy leakin

......a finger bang line...an no brides maids involved, preposterous!!!


v/ The Other guy..sike imean LECTURE! he wasnt as forced & rather simple but he actually made more shots land that way. where the other guy..just forced wordplay & stated questions instead of knockin lecs out

[Allen Knight]

I'll finish up here though. And I think that you ought to see
It aint that I'm 'running outta class' - you're just a Lecture that's borin' me

Vs

This is big time vs little league I dont care what rabbit you pull out the hat
in the BA you got your ass kicked by Atomic... & no I have no punch for that
You be bitchin & complainin, freepostin & swayin, sayin' your dope your lyin
you remind me of other pussy ass niggas on this site & I don't Battle Hymens

V/lecture, this was another close one, Gazette has the idea but needs to work on wording u have some good ideas like the electric concept coulda been nice if word dif, i think lect was just a lil bit more consistent but had some played shit to g-spot is old work on ur concepts u'll be ok, close an props yah'll.

[Flow]

This wasn't a bad match for two new guys - alot of creative concepts
Pulled off poorly vs a number of played concepts played....


There's only one quotable in this battle so it naturally makes
Lotb hence where my vote lies

The quote was
This is big time vs little league I dont care what rabbit you pull out the hat
in the BA you got your ass kicked by Atomic... & no I have no punch for that


That was very statementy but i unlike most like a statement when done well. To be done well a personal and a good lol needs To be there with correct wording...


Win for that

Vote lecture?

[Atomic]

Lex a con & lec trick

vs

nothing

v/ gaz. he had dece wordplay where lec can barely even form a bar. battle wasnt even that close imo. at least gaz has okay concepts/punches.

[Sharp]

Lecs a con and lectric

V

Gazelles and g spot


Close but I think just on preference gazette had it. Lecs a con was worded poorly but still lotb for me so I edge it ever so slightly to gazette

V/gaz

[StarFaggot]

Gaz had lexicon, Jupiter line was smart...

Lecture had no punch for that and finger bang line..

Gaz misses were less bad esp w Lecture calling him a gazelle.

Nice battle. Gaz wins

gaz

i got u with lexicon, and electric...

lecture

i got u with ur opener and closer..however i did find ur verse to be more statementish, while ur opponent came more direct and witty...and for that reason

v/gaz

[Greed]

Helium

Vs

Atomic

Forced sections from gaz like 'lec trick' and shit wasn't helping. Helium was cool but as far as misses lectures wasn't as bad

V lecture

[Philly]

Gazette - nameplay heavy verse. I didn't see that lexicon bar like everyone else...it's cool wordplay, but calling him a con isn't a hard punch, and it was worded poorly. Second bar wasn't good, just a statement, no real wit or creativity. A lec trick was forced, battery charge connection didn't make sense the way it was worded. The helium line was okay, a decent concept but bad execution. Closer was solid.

Lecture - nameplay to start, Gaz-L's I get but it was really forced, not too good. Roast bar wasn't a hard punch, especially cuz everyone gets roasted. Too simple. Atomic bar was simple too but worded well and funny to me. Battle hymens was decent. G-spot / pussy line back to back with hymens wasn't good, and not a creative concept.

Probably seems harsh, but if you're new you should be fine, atleast you both seem to be on the right track. Not a terrible battle just no fire concepts. Pretty close - I had Lecture with the edge for atomic and hymens, and generally better worded shit.

V/ Lecture

[Utmost]

I'll finish up here though. And I think that you ought to see
It aint that I'm 'running outta class' - you're just a Lecture that's borin' me

Vs

This is big time vs little league I dont care what rabbit you pull out the hat
in the BA you got your ass kicked by Atomic... & no I have no punch for that
You be bitchin & complainin, freepostin & swayin, sayin' your dope your lyin
you remind me of other pussy ass niggas on this site & I don't Battle Hymens

close battle here
Gaz, lexicon was a lil forced to me, rest was dece. good ideas here bad execution tho, closer was good.

Lecture, wording was a bit smoother and connections were a bit better.

v/Lecture, i felt his verse was a bit more polished, also Gazettes nameplays kinda fell flat coz either bad connection or no actual punch