NOT a Site Diss! CopyPat Double Feature (with audio)

Rojo187 · 07-03-2013, 04:11 PM

first dude was cool...I liked his cadence switch at the end...but since it's 06 I can't really critique really until I hear suttin more recent..lyrics are on point like most textcees are..flow was decent...

second one was def more flowable...more natural...

juss work on your delivery...maybe recite the lyrics with more aggression or memorize the bars so you can work on your emotion...

it's pretty coo...y'all both would benefit alot from a better Mic...it would add that punch to the bars...

07-03-2013, 04:11 PM	#3
Rojo187 Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 208 Champed The Hunt for Cane VII Rep Power: 37	first dude was cool...I liked his cadence switch at the end...but since it's 06 I can't really critique really until I hear suttin more recent..lyrics are on point like most textcees are..flow was decent... second one was def more flowable...more natural... juss work on your delivery...maybe recite the lyrics with more aggression or memorize the bars so you can work on your emotion... it's pretty coo...y'all both would benefit alot from a better Mic...it would add that punch to the bars...