Type 2 He whose name shall not be spokenbetes (S9 - Malachi - Camp)

Spoken · 07-03-2013, 10:37 AM

Overal it displayed a strong point of diverse point of views honestly... Sharp came consistent with the delivery being very strong through out and Malachi nice up on your writing... My second read from you overall and I gotta say way better and camp as well last verse I read to this is a huge up. I can't break down the good and bad shit cause its already been praised and I'd be just milking the vine really but this as a whole was a nice little counterpart off each other nice creativity to each his own really fellas

07-03-2013, 10:37 AM	#19
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	Overal it displayed a strong point of diverse point of views honestly... Sharp came consistent with the delivery being very strong through out and Malachi nice up on your writing... My second read from you overall and I gotta say way better and camp as well last verse I read to this is a huge up. I can't break down the good and bad shit cause its already been praised and I'd be just milking the vine really but this as a whole was a nice little counterpart off each other nice creativity to each his own really fellas __________________ WP Po'ethics