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official hypedaddy.
Join Date: Jun 2013
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you tell 'em girl i got your back. they just don't understand you. keep spitting that hot fiyah. `1
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06-26-2013, 04:37 PM
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if you can say something with meaning, introduce more than 1 syllable to your rhyming words, change your scheme up to include internal rhymes you will come across much more skilled. elevate.
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06-26-2013, 07:09 PM
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Do what is right.
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06-26-2013, 07:20 PM
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Do what is right.
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Your end rhymes don't rhyme.
here doesnt rhyme with air air doesnt rhyme with rhianna rhianna doesnt rhyme with ballout ballout doesnt rhyme with hits hits doesnt rhyme with bottles bottles doesnt rhyme with sky..
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06-29-2013, 10:33 PM
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Location: I live in Florida
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everyone has a Diff taste in music, but Ya'll don't have to be rude about it.
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06-30-2013, 12:25 AM
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Leave you flatlined.
Join Date: Feb 2013
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Nigmas comment leaned me.
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