TYSON VS GENOCIDE (Topical Battle) TYSON WINS

[Jah Homie]

Both ya'll are ballers. Real talk. I really gotta nitpick through the details.
Genocide: Was great. I never felt the solid punch -- it seems more were put in the buildups. The imagery was great, and the wordplay was definitley above average -- but it wasn't anything really special. I have to say that there were one or two ryhmes that were off-scheme.

Originally Posted by Geno

So much dust -feathers frollicking, I mean picture it though
Watching the world through a glass pane as the window explodes

Tyson -- I felt the wordplay went hand-in-hand with the metaphors. Throughout the whole 16, you managed to keep the whole scheme rhyming. Good proportional use of syllables throughout the punches -- I could really feel the anger. The ending capped it off. It was real smooth, and well put together.

This was pretty awesome here:

I shrug at that expectation drugs calm that ex fixation
Fuck who provided the inclination that its ok to sacrifice my soul for a nation

I actually felt the vocabulary and shcemes were a bit better with Tyson. Tried to judge this earlier, read through it, came to the opposite conclusion, went back and felt it. Again, I can't really fault the lines of either and this is on some minute detail shit.