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Old 10-27-2024, 02:15 AM   #1
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peeped the archives just to assess the prime version of you
history shows u left an indelible mark and then returned as one too
made the fake acc “jaknyfe” on rb, even tried to sound like a brit
every site knows u n ur personas suck so by all accounts ur a bitch
this verse requires critical thinking skills & youve never employed that
so i wont even say this creatively: bitch you look like a soyjak
insecure bald loser. at the drop of a hat id pack u with lead
at the drop of a hat ud only scramble to put it back on ur head
n no wonder ur so disrespected. career full of irrelevant matches
u can seed first in any tourney since u always surrender the fastest
everything u do sucks. once tried ur flies, maybe those lines r legit
bro i got nothing…even trout wouldnt be caught dead biting ur shit
u log on every site and act like ur such a big part of our history
making ppl wanna rip their hair outs a shit way to garner some sympathy
u started balding in high school?? admitting that shit might finish him
hairline migrated so young it couldve been a naturalized citizen
u didnt get doxed dumbass, diablo just found pictures of ur shitty face
u know what is a “bad look for business” ? those selfies on ur fishing page
a picture’s worth a thousand words, topical writers can see that
& for one battle u wrote galleries worth…of complaints about feedback
60 rounds of 556 leave his fuckin arteries leaking
the way this mag’ll break verse down ud swear lars was critiquing
speaking of which…
why challenge baron? just to show ur not so ill with text?
if ur trying to grow through topicals maybe try minoxidil instead
battles and tantrums, u throwing these i obviously expect
with the way ur lifes going i hope “yourself off a bridge” is next
grandstanding and backtracking. if ur on a ledge id assist with the fall
verse i hope u find the right headspace. by considering not existing at all
racist as hell on facebook, painted that wall with your white hurt
of course i support DEI - the world’s much better off when you diverse
speaking of ur politics, that explains ur ridiculous erratic habits
its ok to die on that hill about voting, just wish u did it with ashley babbit

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Old 10-27-2024, 05:16 AM   #2
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insecure bald loser. at the drop of a hat id pack u with lead
at the drop of a hat ud only scramble to put it back on ur head

everything u do sucks. once tried ur flies, maybe those lines r legit
bro i got nothing…even trout wouldnt be caught dead biting ur shit

u started balding in high school?? admitting that shit might finish him
hairline migrated so young it couldve been a naturalized citizen
Pretty much the whole verse was fire but these ones especially leaned me. This was really really good. You got at him from a bunch of different angles. Great wording - both in terms of sounding tough and in the technical sense to pull off the wordplays. Yeah. This was excellent. Top tier stuff. Well done.


Man say what you will about Headless but he’s inspired some of the best work I’ve read in a good long while. Maybe text is not dead after all.
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Old 10-29-2024, 09:40 AM   #6
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Why not battle here, out of interest?
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and get 2 votes over 90 days....
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and get 2 votes over 90 days....
bro u would have conceded by the time the second vote arrived anyway
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riiiight your diss was a 6/10
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there's no point- he couldn't write a decent diss with a thesis worth of material- I don't even know who that bum is.
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there's no point- he couldn't write a decent diss with a thesis worth of material- I don't even know who that bum is.
shut ur dweeb ass up
"the nuance...the intri***y..."


and what would u know about a thesis u bald dropout

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enjoy that void of nobody knowing who the fuck you are....
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enjoy that void of nobody knowing who the fuck you are....
yeah man its actually great not having my fishing page and facebook rants plastered on this forum for being an insufferable bitch but to each their own
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yeah man its actually great not having my fishing page and facebook rants plastered on this forum for being an insufferable bitch but to each their own
you flip burgers my guy- at least I'm doing my own thing
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you flip burgers my guy- at least I'm doing my own thing
see thats the thing. u dont know what im doing. and i know youre bald and dropped out of a creative writing course so i get to laugh
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I dropped out for events of which you don't know- and it wasn't a creative writing course, it was English Literature. But please share your life with us lol.

Gl vs. Soule in the topical battle.
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I dropped out for events of which you don't know- and it wasn't a creative writing course, it was English Literature. But please share your life with us lol.

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might wanna change that on ur linkedin then pal

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