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Old 10-23-2024, 10:12 PM   #1
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Default Narcissistic Arrogance in Text

I only date hoes that match, with a loser.
Gotta look in wards to catch the abuser,
but you're none the wiser.
Yo, I'm laughing in Puma,
then talked shit to some guy...
Now, I'm getting bashed in an Uber.
Told him - "Real axe, for a while" ,
you think: "Imma smash in consumer".
And readers read thrice, clues differ.
But who cares how words get presented except nerds?
I fuck with quotations
to sell honest, not lose if hers whisper like birds.
Then go shop off the vibe,
cruising the missile.
Got enough business to risk it.
But now?
Gloat status broke Hades in half.
Trick delivered, you figured the picture?
I played my own stuff.
And my hunch is for cunts,
hyphens-and-blunts,
fillers that work.
^Haha, Irony Orc.
And Sweden if they didn't have Björk.
Don't rate it, it's
Grade S plus talent for dots.
Hatred, like colorful sluts.
Don't like it?
I guess it's that time of the month.
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So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.


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Old 10-23-2024, 10:29 PM   #2
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