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Old 10-12-2024, 04:24 AM   #9
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truly beautiful probably the best piece all week.. and thats a landslide like you painted her so pretty even with her slight over shadow of incest rape your character held herself soo high.. man structure was original why it was cool otherwise it was a lil stretched.. killer verse my main man..

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dude that whole last 3/4 of the second stanza with the doubles was fire.. man im like not enough to take out the best of the week.. yet you hit with another line after line.. really capturing in a subtle way the entire puzzle take on the topic with the girl inner dream to have her.. pretty damn good..

vote = symetrik

i honestly think if this was an open mic scar would have taken the week out but this is a battle.. when you something ten lines hitting like that you cant just walk by the.. congrats and gl guys
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