TTT Semi-Finals: Etherwave vs. Objective

Scar · 07-23-2024, 04:15 PM

etherwave this was a very cool piece. i loved the concept of this verse. at first i was unsure of the "he" i thought maybe you were talking about the brain, but you were referring to the skeleton did. i really like how colorful your language were. "suffered in that cupboard"
dope.

Objective great story bro. you personify the crash dummy lol. my only issue is that i don't know what the underlying point of the verse. but i love the flow and imagery bro.

i have to go with that one that has more gravitas and with that said i will go with etherwave.

07-23-2024, 04:15 PM	#23
Scar Senior Member Join Date: May 2019 Posts: 566 Battle Record: 7-5 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League Rep Power: 5689709	etherwave this was a very cool piece. i loved the concept of this verse. at first i was unsure of the "he" i thought maybe you were talking about the brain, but you were referring to the skeleton did. i really like how colorful your language were. "suffered in that cupboard" dope. Objective great story bro. you personify the crash dummy lol. my only issue is that i don't know what the underlying point of the verse. but i love the flow and imagery bro. i have to go with that one that has more gravitas and with that said i will go with etherwave. __________________ I remember the poplar trees