TTT Round One: Etherwave vs Master Rock

Candy · 07-12-2024, 09:26 PM

wave:
the new girl to the group welcome, i hope you kick some ass and turn some heads doing it.. aite with that said loved your opener puts you right in your place pretty but not too manly to call it ugly in a alpha male type of way.. still holden it down yo like you want to play in this verse.. the flip on the first bar hot.. doubles with internals dope artistic expression and brilliant word choice.. crisis was looking a bit loose but by the end of the bar it hits.. concience good choice of word to solid maintains the verse.. second stanza dope it hit one punch after another i had to read it all the way through not plot by plot point where you anaylize and just take in its awesome but the whole stanza def did its thing.. rocked almost its way through.. emotion 3rd way in real raw.. story unfolded nicely right to just bang the nail on the head with that last part of salvation lost.. hmm interesting the ai turned against its own but the manind still grow their grains plow and what not but the computer gens just stomp away cool cool.. i really enjoyed it thanks..

master:
the scrap metal machine was f'n dope dude it was like some potential to potential to some potential again like these lines might fall short but that last three words dope as f'.. i like introduction of the orical.. real cool the machine prophicizing was a nice build up to.. this is a solid outlay man the whole story is structured like a beast not to mention the actual rhyme layout is fire a good point to mention right about now cause the story factors kicken my ass lol.. man they momentium in the end few lines was fire.. then you get to the end and theirs no connection to it.. im like wtf.. but the whole verse bar one line was sick.. good read thans..

vote = etherwave

man i had to seriously think about this and it came down to one master had the rap/poet structure in the bag but ether had the story telling with a climax/punchline.. im like do i go for the loose based style which style has original appeal or go for the bases fully loaded hard hitting piece that really knocks you on your ass how it flows.. man i took script writing class soo im a sucker for a good story.. g/l guys

07-12-2024, 09:26 PM	#1
Candy Sell Her Join Date: Feb 2018 Posts: 1,075 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 8518432	wave: the new girl to the group welcome, i hope you kick some ass and turn some heads doing it.. aite with that said loved your opener puts you right in your place pretty but not too manly to call it ugly in a alpha male type of way.. still holden it down yo like you want to play in this verse.. the flip on the first bar hot.. doubles with internals dope artistic expression and brilliant word choice.. crisis was looking a bit loose but by the end of the bar it hits.. concience good choice of word to solid maintains the verse.. second stanza dope it hit one punch after another i had to read it all the way through not plot by plot point where you anaylize and just take in its awesome but the whole stanza def did its thing.. rocked almost its way through.. emotion 3rd way in real raw.. story unfolded nicely right to just bang the nail on the head with that last part of salvation lost.. hmm interesting the ai turned against its own but the manind still grow their grains plow and what not but the computer gens just stomp away cool cool.. i really enjoyed it thanks.. master: the scrap metal machine was f'n dope dude it was like some potential to potential to some potential again like these lines might fall short but that last three words dope as f'.. i like introduction of the orical.. real cool the machine prophicizing was a nice build up to.. this is a solid outlay man the whole story is structured like a beast not to mention the actual rhyme layout is fire a good point to mention right about now cause the story factors kicken my ass lol.. man they momentium in the end few lines was fire.. then you get to the end and theirs no connection to it.. im like wtf.. but the whole verse bar one line was sick.. good read thans.. vote = etherwave man i had to seriously think about this and it came down to one master had the rap/poet structure in the bag but ether had the story telling with a climax/punchline.. im like do i go for the loose based style which style has original appeal or go for the bases fully loaded hard hitting piece that really knocks you on your ass how it flows.. man i took script writing class soo im a sucker for a good story.. g/l guys __________________ curious más curioso y más curioso