Aero vs Scar

symetrik · 07-18-2023, 08:27 PM

mvgt Scar

Aero had another goofy random verse (which I'm not against, as long as it keeps you writing) - flex your comfort zone, etc. but it didn't compete.

Scar had a solid piece; I didn't quite feel the connection as a topic, and more as a gimmick - some connection throughout and the last two words. The banter went okay, although I didn't understand who was who, why they mattered, or even why the glass mattered.

If Aero came with anything else it might have contested.

07-18-2023, 08:27 PM	#11
symetrik Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 709 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 12429299	mvgt Scar Aero had another goofy random verse (which I'm not against, as long as it keeps you writing) - flex your comfort zone, etc. but it didn't compete. Scar had a solid piece; I didn't quite feel the connection as a topic, and more as a gimmick - some connection throughout and the last two words. The banter went okay, although I didn't understand who was who, why they mattered, or even why the glass mattered. If Aero came with anything else it might have contested.