06-11-2015, 03:16 PM | #1 |
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DONT THINK
Habitual deliberation. Deliberate. Definitive sense; I make it.
Constant contemplation. Is God some ancient pondered plot to save us. Consider consideration. I censor my sentence by sensing taste. It's compulsive. Repulsive. Repugnant. Impulsive. Indulgent. Reluctance to reflect on one's reflection. Obsessed with what's incessant. A second of second thought lasts forever if ever paused to question each lesson taught like it's better than getting lost. I'm mulling it over. I'm weighing my options. Opportunity's losing steam under the weight of the process. My behavior is honest, but nothing came from a promise; the best of intentions crest at pretentious when initiation's a problem. I catalog these matters. I imagine. Exhaustive. When at a loss for hazards I enact and I cause them. A caricature in characters. Words. Did I inherit a curse. So much more to writing in a journal than what my parents observed. A dissection of essence. Impressed with the narratives curves. How I could manipulate the page and your merits, in turn. Atheists playing God with a Satanist way of thought. Not Satanist in a crazy sense, I mean the way in which we're Gods of our own way and senses. Paint the picture's dawn with rays emitting 'cross the day's ascending frost and you'll wake to living calm. Paint the picture's dawn with razor fitted jaws, serrated riddled claws and a shade that sits too long? You may not wake today at all. I'm trapped between the lines. Life's a dialog. A lie I write in songs. I lie at night and talk to the rhymes and lines I've drawn. They call themselves people, astounding, 'cause they don't know my easel is see through and makes up their surroundings. |
06-11-2015, 03:26 PM | #2 |
The Clown Prince
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familiar faces behind a mask eh...
This was a nice piece, a good little return of sorts
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06-11-2015, 03:27 PM | #3 |
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This was pretty great.
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06-12-2015, 04:47 PM | #4 |
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Top notch.. Lovin it.
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06-13-2015, 02:35 PM | #6 |
obsessed
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Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
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- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
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- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
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- never lost game of hide and seek
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sucked thx
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06-13-2015, 07:37 PM | #7 |
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Repped, BB.
Cuz I still literally laugh out loud at these. They don't get old and this one had 3 great set-ups for it. |
06-14-2015, 05:59 AM | #8 |
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lmao it's obv Meta @dr. Dog
this was dope though: A caricature in characters. Words. Did I inherit a curse. So much more to writing in a journal than what my parents observed. picked up again towards the end good to see you writing again |
06-14-2015, 10:24 AM | #9 |
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Welcome back. This was lovely!
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06-14-2015, 11:03 AM | #10 |
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Fuck this nigga, man.
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