XI WK II: Cereal (1-0) vs. Dope girl (0-0) (CEREAL WINS 6-0)

Scar · 12-14-2022, 02:48 AM

CK i think underneath he weirdoness, theres a talented writer. what happened to the dude handling business during the RSTL? anyway, this latest incarnation is frustrating. i just don't understand some of the line, like what does this mean?

Quote:

One day i will be princess, i prince

what the fuck does that mean, son? i cant pretend to know what your verse was about. sorry bro.

Dope Girl, what the hell is this? it would put up a dope battle against my 8 years old niece, but this aint it. the rhyme was super unimpressive. loop/hoop dance/chance. wack. i dont even know what that stupid verse was about.

vote/ Cereal Killer. his shit was doo doo too but at least it operated on a higher level than the chick. Frank do i really have to give more details for the battle? i can't read these shits one more time.

Universe · 12-14-2022, 03:08 AM

Cereal:

Well it started horribly and ended less horribly... So that's something. I feel like you forget to write every fourth word that you mean to write down because your bars are a staggering mess of vocabulary. Sometimes it works, most times it doesn't. But you have flashes of competency so that carries you through in battles like this one I suppose.

And don't say stuff like "It was like I still had that heat" or "trying to keep my pencil in play" in my threads ever again. You have no heat and never did. You shouldn't even be holding a pencil unless it is flipped around and you're using the eraser to undo all the damage that you have done to my retinas over the years.

Go sniff some glue.

Dope Girl:

I don't know what that was. You were talking, basically. I don't see the purpose of you being here other than to casually say "good luck loves" to people. I didn't enjoy this lame excuse for a verse in any way and I'm dumber for having read it.

That said, you seem like a nice person so... best of luck.

Vote: Cereal

12-14-2022, 03:08 AM	#2
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	Cereal: Well it started horribly and ended less horribly... So that's something. I feel like you forget to write every fourth word that you mean to write down because your bars are a staggering mess of vocabulary. Sometimes it works, most times it doesn't. But you have flashes of competency so that carries you through in battles like this one I suppose. And don't say stuff like "It was like I still had that heat" or "trying to keep my pencil in play" in my threads ever again. You have no heat and never did. You shouldn't even be holding a pencil unless it is flipped around and you're using the eraser to undo all the damage that you have done to my retinas over the years. Go sniff some glue. Dope Girl: I don't know what that was. You were talking, basically. I don't see the purpose of you being here other than to casually say "good luck loves" to people. I didn't enjoy this lame excuse for a verse in any way and I'm dumber for having read it. That said, you seem like a nice person so... best of luck. Vote: Cereal __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..