XI WK 1: Veritas (0-0) vs. Universe (0-0) (UNIVERSE WINS)

Quill · 12-04-2022, 07:51 PM

@Universe This was pretty nice. Mechanically, it was very sound. Smooth flow, solid scheme work. Thematically it works. It reads in my head as a 50s radio jockey. Checked all the boxes as far as tying into the topic. Would have loved to see a more linear approach to narration, but I can deny the broadcasted propoganda rant approach gave you the freedom to flex more scheme wise.

12-04-2022, 07:51 PM	#5
Quill Member Join Date: Nov 2018 Posts: 56 Rep Power: 0	@Universe This was pretty nice. Mechanically, it was very sound. Smooth flow, solid scheme work. Thematically it works. It reads in my head as a 50s radio jockey. Checked all the boxes as far as tying into the topic. Would have loved to see a more linear approach to narration, but I can deny the broadcasted propoganda rant approach gave you the freedom to flex more scheme wise.