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Pharaohs Army · 12-01-2022, 02:20 AM

@Answer
Did you spit this? Practice at all back when you wrote it?

I haven't. YET

Syllables counts look OK at a glance tonight. You're a good writer so I'm making an assumption that it'd work. But even if it's good, I don't know how so many rhymes in a row would sound.

With this many end rhymes there's GOT to be some reaches in there, but, let's just say I'm upping again for the culture and will try it when I'm free Friday night.

*Edit:
That is the long way of saying let's give it the old college try. Shit's dope. don't get me wrong with the "sizing up" above.

12-01-2022, 02:20 AM	#9
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	@Answer Did you spit this? Practice at all back when you wrote it? I haven't. YET Syllables counts look OK at a glance tonight. You're a good writer so I'm making an assumption that it'd work. But even if it's good, I don't know how so many rhymes in a row would sound. With this many end rhymes there's GOT to be some reaches in there, but, let's just say I'm upping again for the culture and will try it when I'm free Friday night. Edit: That is the long way of saying let's give it the old college try. Shit's dope. don't get me wrong with the "sizing up" above. Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 12-01-2022 at 02:25 AM.*