SEMI FINALS: #1 EVICTION VS #4 FRANK FRANK ADVANCES

Mike Wrecka · 09-18-2022, 09:08 PM

Eviction- I’ll be honest. I didn’t like this verse. Pretty much the worst I’ve read from you. It didn’t flow very well at all. The first two lines were a disaster and set the tone for the whole verse. You can do a lot better

Frank - this was also well below your norm. I think you got caught up in the gimmick of the Japanese writing. Your multis and rhyme scheme were no where close to your usual. BUT your word choices was more advanced than your opponents. Also the story was more interesting. You need to pick it up bruh. Both your verses in this playoff have been your worst of the season imo

Vote - Frank

09-18-2022, 09:08 PM	#1
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	Eviction- I’ll be honest. I didn’t like this verse. Pretty much the worst I’ve read from you. It didn’t flow very well at all. The first two lines were a disaster and set the tone for the whole verse. You can do a lot better Frank - this was also well below your norm. I think you got caught up in the gimmick of the Japanese writing. Your multis and rhyme scheme were no where close to your usual. BUT your word choices was more advanced than your opponents. Also the story was more interesting. You need to pick it up bruh. Both your verses in this playoff have been your worst of the season imo Vote - Frank __________________ A.bove T.he R.est