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08-31-2022, 03:28 AM
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This was ok rhyme wise but a little on the simplistic side.
Conceptually, that is if my interpretation of it is even accurate Is dope but I think you could have expanded on it a ton more went farther deep down the rabbit hole as it is it feels very short and incomplete more like a quick scribe of thought than a fully fleshed piece but aye keep scribing bruh peace Last edited by JustRap; 08-31-2022 at 03:29 AM. Reason: Rabbit |
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