WEEK FIFTEEN: MASTER ROCK (6-7) vs SINACOG (0-7) ROCK WINS 3-0

Adverse · 08-09-2022, 09:14 PM

Sinacog, I’m not trolling when I say I do really like your style, it’s your own and you own it. I hate how your stories never become anything though, really wanted to hear about the adventures of the Chinese scissor sisters, honestly sounded like an alright premise, but you go off on tangents and end up having nothing to do with the topic. It’s crazy to me. Thanks for participating this season bud.

Master Rock
Thought this was a little spacey (no pun intended) the story wasn’t really linear in my opinion, compared to other pieces you’ve dropped this season at least. But some of the imagery was excellent per usual. You have a knack of bringing the topic picture to life, even when you do a more free flowing verse you’re always able to nail down the picturesque elements of the piece. Decent work

V/Master Rock it was an obvious choice

08-09-2022, 09:14 PM	#5
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Sinacog, I’m not trolling when I say I do really like your style, it’s your own and you own it. I hate how your stories never become anything though, really wanted to hear about the adventures of the Chinese scissor sisters, honestly sounded like an alright premise, but you go off on tangents and end up having nothing to do with the topic. It’s crazy to me. Thanks for participating this season bud. Master Rock Thought this was a little spacey (no pun intended) the story wasn’t really linear in my opinion, compared to other pieces you’ve dropped this season at least. But some of the imagery was excellent per usual. You have a knack of bringing the topic picture to life, even when you do a more free flowing verse you’re always able to nail down the picturesque elements of the piece. Decent work V/Master Rock it was an obvious choice