WEEK THIRTEEN DISCUSSION

Universe · 07-20-2022, 12:06 PM

It's not about the result guys, this isn't sour grapes... it's about me at least knowing you read it, absorbed it, formed an opinion and then voted. Frank clearly had his mind made up before stepping into the thread and he just looked for excuses to justify his hate vote.

Dom, on the other hand, clearly read both pieces and gave a succinct breakdown of his thoughts and sprinkled it with some specifics for good measure. This is literally all I could ask for out of a voter. His "feeling truncated" complaint MADE SENSE when he said it took him out of the POV of Ron Goldman, which I was trying so hard to keep the reader in tune with, and I IMMEDIATELY agreed with it and saw the error. He voted against me yet I'm thankful because I learned something. It was fucking perfect. That's why I love the guy.

That Frank shit needs to go though or at least be edited. If the majority disagree it can stand in the interest of moving the league along.

07-20-2022, 12:06 PM	#21
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	It's not about the result guys, this isn't sour grapes... it's about me at least knowing you read it, absorbed it, formed an opinion and then voted. Frank clearly had his mind made up before stepping into the thread and he just looked for excuses to justify his hate vote. Dom, on the other hand, clearly read both pieces and gave a succinct breakdown of his thoughts and sprinkled it with some specifics for good measure. This is literally all I could ask for out of a voter. His "feeling truncated" complaint MADE SENSE when he said it took him out of the POV of Ron Goldman, which I was trying so hard to keep the reader in tune with, and I IMMEDIATELY agreed with it and saw the error. He voted against me yet I'm thankful because I learned something. It was fucking perfect. That's why I love the guy. That Frank shit needs to go though or at least be edited. If the majority disagree it can stand in the interest of moving the league along. __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..