Adverse vs Mac - ADVERSE WINS

[Dominate]

Originally Posted by Adverse

Mac AKA the Brazillian

About to show this mangy terrier how we bang in America
My threats come true when I run into you, only thing Mac runnin into’s the language barrier
Decent. Good set up. Worded well content wise, 2nd line a little long mechanically but it's not a big deal in most battles including this one
Ya girl wasn’t used to a dick this big, best believe I had to break her in
You came home to me using the long bar, n thought you was battling MaCe again
Wp is meh but it's overall OKish with the recent personal
Even fucked her at your birthday last year, you ain’t know that I hammered her?
Helped decorate the staircase, pulled out and hung rope on the banisters
Cool idea. Not bad. Good set up
Come swinging pistols akimbo, armed with two specials
Your ass get lifted when I grip the sticks and pull up, so call me Geppetto
dope wp and you definitely did it justice. Think it could have hit harder with tweaked wording or maybe one more tie in. I probably would've gone with something like

blah blah blah... I pull out the steel toys
Geppetto: grip the sticks and pull up on you - this shit's about to get reallll boy

@Mac

Originally Posted by Mac

@Adverse .. kill yourself already

stop chasin a lead . it'll get in over ur head like an afterthought
push the right buttons and you'll feel the snap.. thats a screenshot
Good concept. Needed a better set up, tweaked wording and more than a one syllable rhyme to realise its full potential. It's decent as is
empathy with this suicide watch brat. let the prozac follow thru
hell, if my wife looked like a trans fat i'd clog my artery too
worded beautifully for the punch, and it did hit, but the wording for the wordplay was not quite right for me - calling his wife "a trans fat". Would be better as "If my wife looked trans/fat" IMO. Still, decent hit
works on an assembly line & can't put his life together if he wished
ever seen a verse on his Prime day. bitch wrapped 300 orders in a shift
It's a good personal concept but not worded quite right.
user beat ya on a slim. losing by a couple votes is never a good look
u know tony's robbins hurt ya when u now find comfort in self help books
Again, good concept but the wp wording isn't right. You needed to play around with this to make "Tony Robbins" work, not "Tony's Robbins"

Mac had good concepts but wording held him back. Adverse got it.