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07-14-2022, 10:57 PM
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low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,752
Battle Record: 37-28
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This wasn’t great gentlemen,
Zelph obviously had a rush job of a verse here. Half the shit didn’t rhyme, Aaron it out was an almost Defiant still rusty and focused way too much on the Milan thing. First bar was okay but could have used some major rewording . The rest was ehh Defiant actually had something resembling a battle verse while Zelph sleepwalked this one. V/Defiant |
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