WEEK SEVEN CHAMP MATCH: DOMINATE (6-0) vs MASTER ROCK (4-2) DOM WINS 5-0

Adverse · 05-22-2022, 01:23 PM

Dominate
This was an awesome take man, where last week you were really straightforward and didn’t give the topic a whole lot of thought, this week’s came out of the blue. Really creative take and I really loved the whole sales pitch aspect of it. I think you’ve showed your chops as far as comedy/serious tales go but they don’t really get old in my opinion. You just find new ways to bend the topic. Impressive here, and showed again why you’re the reigning champion.

Rock
Yeah this was your usual piece... really raw emotionally but lacking some of the fine tuning that it needs to contend with a piece like Dom’s. I don’t dislike your narratives or the way you write but it’s just all the same, last week showed what you’re capable of and I wish you brought more of that energy here, in my opinion Dominate won this one pretty handily

V/Dom
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05-22-2022, 01:23 PM	#10
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Dominate This was an awesome take man, where last week you were really straightforward and didn’t give the topic a whole lot of thought, this week’s came out of the blue. Really creative take and I really loved the whole sales pitch aspect of it. I think you’ve showed your chops as far as comedy/serious tales go but they don’t really get old in my opinion. You just find new ways to bend the topic. Impressive here, and showed again why you’re the reigning champion. Rock Yeah this was your usual piece... really raw emotionally but lacking some of the fine tuning that it needs to contend with a piece like Dom’s. I don’t dislike your narratives or the way you write but it’s just all the same, last week showed what you’re capable of and I wish you brought more of that energy here, in my opinion Dominate won this one pretty handily V/Dom .