[Round 2] 2. Advanced Placement vs 8. cum boyz — Advanced Placement advances

[Blue Bayou]

DNA np was an okay use of the names
Aer to get off is a cool idea but done way to indirectly imo.. could've been stronger
Spread for a younger audience was lol cool concept
White on the inside was solid aero ref
A spyder is a Porsche. Looking beyond that, this is a decent metaphor . Cool
JJ was cool. Good personal on the teacher concept
Dominatrix is a played np On him but the way you used the A for aero and all the inner tie ins was pretty dope... this was well worded and executed
Aero quotes was okay
Shrink regularly was hilarious. Love that concept and style of bar
Klay thompason is technically well written.. the wording is good snf the tie ins were very well done, but the punch is really weak here...you're going to pay off cops to bury a guy that jumps to us death? I dunno, creative but not hard hitting

Vs.

Pu up to squeeze rhe metal together is cool for a "metal" gun bar.. executed well, nice
Mosquitos was a cool metaphor with good tie ins , but light
Red dot is a dope gun bar and np
Ryu street fighter plays have to be played but this was def creative with good layers to it
Bare markets is a solid np
I've seen a bunch of regrats / Tommy concepts.. this like the previous is well written and thought out tho
Romance is solid, long distance tie in was smart.. conceptually getting redundant tho
Doubling up was ight, Kinda funny
Fuck with a switch up is a dope concept.. doesn't really work because a switch up is ON lol.. but i dig it
Closer very statement ish with little pay off



Cool battle here, both verses were very well written technically... Aero and Dom has a lot of good concepts but a bit overkill on the attack lines imo... Answer and Bare were pretty solid throughout as well with more variety, but had more misses

Props to all I got Aero and Dom taking it