[Round 1] 3. -FatGingerZ- vs 10. SMACK [FatGingerZ advance]

[bare ryu]

fatgingerz
These vets in danger, both got a rep for molestin’ strangers
Cuz Mac been to more courts for taping legs than athletic trainers
smooth wording. not a lot of sting but the execution carries it
& Sharp’s divorced, wanted love but was met with a harsh taste
And that separation had his ex taking balls to the house like Ja’marr Chase
cool wording. good bar. dont watch football so i didnt get the reference immediately which kinda took away from it but the wording kept the momentum
Skinny faggot, keep talking and get punched in the neck
Stays debating Unions in discord, but can’t stay in one with his ex
lmfao this one was pretty funny
We’re fun drunks! U drink vegan martinis before ER visits.. & ur the smallest guy
When we Cialis a good time, you gotta pop those just to have one then almost die
pretty good a little light for me though
Wife is gone, & she got it all in the divorce.. there's no lookin back
Tragic.. She left u without any pussy for comfort wayyy before she took the cat
not too sold on the pussy/cat angle but ur approach was funny. the personal added to it too. solid closer

smack
Seth, thanks for the support. I'm glad for your cherished friendship...
Because every time I think of your family I feel relieved my marriage ended
not a bad opener
Stopped art for the kids but I'm the failure? That's absurd and it's twisted
You've created two things in your miserable life and one turned out autistic
yikes...lol
User, you love my partner as much as you hate battling. Homie, listen:
An extreme desire to spoon Mac doesn't count as wanting to crush the competition
light jab, pretty funny. just not entirely sold on it though. maybe it seems a bit on the nose
Fat, old, unmotivated. Seth n User deserve every roast and neg
These two are the most disgusting drain in text since the one in User's bloated leg
i think i get the reference if i recall some of the pics on dc. decent jab
you're on the verge of death - man ur whole family should know
Insurance risk form.. checked all the boxes quickly like its a website cookies window
i read this a couple times and i think the angle is really fresh but the execution is alright. maybe some adjustments to the punch could have made it a stronger closer

my vote goes to smack. this one was pretty close to me. both had a haymaker but i think smack just proved to be more consistent with their other lines. could go either way though

[Fracture]

this was a fun read

so... with user and seth, i thought the comical approach on personals was nice. my fav line was the union one, taking the cat and jamar chasse were also sick. cialis was a big miss for me. stifled the momentum a little


Sharp and Mac... I felt the marriage ended was an okay start and a good call on a premeditated counter. autistic was brutal and line of the battle imo. aside from those two opening bars I liked bloated leg, but the closer was long winded and nothing more than clever. also didnt care for crush the competition, felt like that could of been better


Without sounding too cliche this battles tough because with user and seth i felt there was one more bar that was likable, while with sharp and mac i felt they had the easy line of the battle. gottta vote seth and user for consistency, but whoever wrote autistic line is the battles mvp