2 Zygote vs. 3 Red Glare [Red Glare Advances 5-2]

06-23-2013, 11:43 AM

Red. Your verse was good. I enjoyed the story of the writing much more than I did any if the technical writing abilities in your verse. I had to stop a lot because of the rhyme scheme and flow was off in my opinion. I did enjoy the story a lot tho so good job

Z. Loved this. Loved everything about this verse. The story in verse was intriguing and I was never thrown off by any of the flow or rhyme schemes.

Both were good imo. I just enjoyed 1 quite a lot more than another.

V/ Zygote

06-23-2013, 11:43 AM	#1
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	Red. Your verse was good. I enjoyed the story of the writing much more than I did any if the technical writing abilities in your verse. I had to stop a lot because of the rhyme scheme and flow was off in my opinion. I did enjoy the story a lot tho so good job Z. Loved this. Loved everything about this verse. The story in verse was intriguing and I was never thrown off by any of the flow or rhyme schemes. Both were good imo. I just enjoyed 1 quite a lot more than another. V/ Zygote