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06-22-2013, 11:40 PM
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rhyme capsule.
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It didn't really feel genuine to me. A lot of times you were just saying some shit that rhymes without expressing it in a very powerful of effective manner. You seemed almost dispassionate because of that, I come away from this verse with little enjoyment, but agree with Rugged that I didn't hate it all, even if not hating it is not very high praise.
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