Forever’s Never Enough

Alice · 09-02-2021, 01:02 PM

Thought this was, simply put, beautifully written. I don’t think I read a verse as “poetic” as this by you before so it’s even more impressive. Also loved the killing me softly reference as it also fit the theme while still maintaining that obvious, nostalgic evocation. The ending was vividly descriptive and brought everything together really well with that poetic-tale. Hope to see this kind of approach more from you.

09-02-2021, 01:02 PM	#6
Alice Member Join Date: Feb 2018 Posts: 53 Rep Power: 53114	Thought this was, simply put, beautifully written. I don’t think I read a verse as “poetic” as this by you before so it’s even more impressive. Also loved the killing me softly reference as it also fit the theme while still maintaining that obvious, nostalgic evocation. The ending was vividly descriptive and brought everything together really well with that poetic-tale. Hope to see this kind of approach more from you.