Forever’s Never Enough

Vellum · 08-25-2021, 08:27 PM

The killing her softly line wasn’t only dope but also brought me back to the days of The Fugee’s washing me away in a rip tide of nostalgic memories. Beautiful vocabulary but more importantly choice of words. Imagery vividly played a movie in my mind. I also love the emotion my favorite part was

Love suddenly seems
so obtainably near
as cloudy skies open up
and the sun reappears.

It’s not that I thought it was technically better than the rest of the piece but the way it shared emotion that’s relatable to mostly everyone I’m sure. It was like a breath of fresh air or finding out that all hope wasn’t lost after all.

I got no negative criticism. That was a great time, keep it up!

08-25-2021, 08:27 PM	#1
Vellum Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 3 Rep Power: 0	The killing her softly line wasn’t only dope but also brought me back to the days of The Fugee’s washing me away in a rip tide of nostalgic memories. Beautiful vocabulary but more importantly choice of words. Imagery vividly played a movie in my mind. I also love the emotion my favorite part was Love suddenly seems so obtainably near as cloudy skies open up and the sun reappears. It’s not that I thought it was technically better than the rest of the piece but the way it shared emotion that’s relatable to mostly everyone I’m sure. It was like a breath of fresh air or finding out that all hope wasn’t lost after all. I got no negative criticism. That was a great time, keep it up!