Dust of our Labor Keystyke

Alice · 08-14-2021, 05:35 PM

I missed your work!

This was refreshing and a treat to read. Lots of unique references tied together unconventionally. I think every line held a higher meaning and was relevant to the underlying concept here, which I think you wrote on before but you elevated it even more with the references of origin. The “phoenician elite”, “Caucuses cave” and the “fate, finance and faith” lines are only some of the highlights to me. Some of the terms you used, like the brotherhood of the serpent, I’m unfamiliar with. But they still reminded me somewhat of K Rhino (in a good way). Of course I loved the Amen-Ra play and reference too, you usually incorporated those mythological aspects so effortlessly without them seeming out of place.

Thanks for sharing.

08-14-2021, 05:35 PM	#3
Alice Member Join Date: Feb 2018 Posts: 53 Rep Power: 53114	I missed your work! This was refreshing and a treat to read. Lots of unique references tied together unconventionally. I think every line held a higher meaning and was relevant to the underlying concept here, which I think you wrote on before but you elevated it even more with the references of origin. The “phoenician elite”, “Caucuses cave” and the “fate, finance and faith” lines are only some of the highlights to me. Some of the terms you used, like the brotherhood of the serpent, I’m unfamiliar with. But they still reminded me somewhat of K Rhino (in a good way). Of course I loved the Amen-Ra play and reference too, you usually incorporated those mythological aspects so effortlessly without them seeming out of place. Thanks for sharing.