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Everything's Connected
Join Date: Nov 2017
Location: Niagara Falls, Canada
Posts: 1,001
Battle Record: 19-8
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sn00p:
Digging with wordplay attempts, man. Although some felt a tiny bit off to me. Incan is cool but to me it didn't really work both ways, in terms of a double entendre, which is what I look for. had Tencent was one I had to read twice, very cool. Lay foundations was a dope personal as well. First time I've seen a sn00p verse - overall, I thought this was pretty entertaining. Well done. Incredible: I think the verse is solid technically, but much like myself, too braggadocious and "statementish" to really land. I think your flow was really good... World wars line was heavy too - but nothing else really connected for me in a meaningful way. I would like to see you drop some Open Mic's and maybe even join a topical league though. Vote - sn00p
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