Metamorphosis (March 26th)

Eŋg · 04-05-2021, 09:00 AM

bizarre. that you'd write briefly in the perspective from the distillation of just about everything that's wrong with popular urban youth culture today. i don't even know if the sexualization of her is the worst problem (it certainly is a problem) but instead just another aspect of a more widely pervasive freudian horror no one wants to begin looking at. it's wise to observe causal relations, and how often we're caught up on the symptom where we, at best, prune the very ends of branches totally forgoing the root.

the surface is of little interest, what we are after is the root.

i didn't really enjoy this. the content seemed a bit misguided, it could have been more playful or clever, and i don't think i really vibrated with the core sentiment which my preamble was about, basically. the writing was just ok, if that, so not enough to pique my interest.

not hating, just stating. i don't know what your motive was for writing this was, and i'm alright with that.

04-05-2021, 09:00 AM	#1
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	bizarre. that you'd write briefly in the perspective from the distillation of just about everything that's wrong with popular urban youth culture today. i don't even know if the sexualization of her is the worst problem (it certainly is a problem) but instead just another aspect of a more widely pervasive freudian horror no one wants to begin looking at. it's wise to observe causal relations, and how often we're caught up on the symptom where we, at best, prune the very ends of branches totally forgoing the root. the surface is of little interest, what we are after is the root. i didn't really enjoy this. the content seemed a bit misguided, it could have been more playful or clever, and i don't think i really vibrated with the core sentiment which my preamble was about, basically. the writing was just ok, if that, so not enough to pique my interest. not hating, just stating. i don't know what your motive was for writing this was, and i'm alright with that.