Rnd 1 - Blue Bayou vs Eviction - OPEN FOR VOTES

UserName · 01-13-2021, 02:08 AM

Eviction -

opener was cool, kinda statementy, blue light was cool, wasnt a fan of much after that, but it read well, i dont wanna short you on that - multi's were there, rhyme scheme was good, just didnt HIT for me.

Blue -

idk who dia is, kinda learning as i go in this match but it seems like a real solid personal with the basement line from what I'm gathering here, feeding frenzy was ok, alias line was bang, closer was cool/but kinda lukewarm as an ending, i might've switched the order up a bit but that's just me dude

still, handily giving this to Blue

01-13-2021, 02:08 AM	#17
UserName K I N G Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 685 Battle Record: 15-10 Rep Power: 3228865	Eviction - opener was cool, kinda statementy, blue light was cool, wasnt a fan of much after that, but it read well, i dont wanna short you on that - multi's were there, rhyme scheme was good, just didnt HIT for me. Blue - idk who dia is, kinda learning as i go in this match but it seems like a real solid personal with the basement line from what I'm gathering here, feeding frenzy was ok, alias line was bang, closer was cool/but kinda lukewarm as an ending, i might've switched the order up a bit but that's just me dude still, handily giving this to Blue __________________ First Class