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12-23-2020, 09:57 PM
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I like “my best work is my next verse” and the line about your siblings. Everything else sort of reads like a grandfather wrote it then performed it at a D.A.R.E. assembly for kids in in-school suspension. Not terrible, entertaining actually. In a wholesome way.
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