WEEK 8: Jayfresh 3-3 VS iSpaz 3-3 iSPAZ WINS

iSpaz · 11-26-2020, 04:30 PM

You cock sucka. I'm like blockbusta in its prime with the mag gripped
Thinkin you can go blow for blow with me but I aint down with that fag shit
Hate the kid. This beta bitch only frontin online thats ad hoc
You prolly readin this verse as aggressive as if I pressed caps lock
Back from vacay. You were great in ur heyday but what you had is far
You tried graspin a power line nd then shocked us all with how bad you are
Outfit crispy. Cashmere cuz it fits me you must be tweakin on a limb
Yeah I'll beat Fresh to death and the drip is just blood leakin outta him
I'll take ur wife. Show her the life nd then the pump break ya in two
1 shot'll have the steel ring around my finger.. after I take it from you

JaysonFresh · 11-28-2020, 04:52 PM

get him some pain killers

quick key

yo,

hands around ya neck nigga i gotta tight hold grip
Percocet? Naah. Spaz searching for an entire bottle like u cant hold it in long enuff ona road trip.
fresh the type to crush ya spine while u screaaam stop
when Im done u'll need somethin' to prop ya neck up like airport souvenir shops
& Im pickin off every member of his fam when the gun cock
brrrrrat..every body 'count doubles' ..10 sec left on Pop-a-Shot
uppercut alone'll make u extremely nauseous
rearrange ya jaw, when ya mouth waters for food it turns to a leaky faucet
gotchu targeted, sniper scope in close range
must be scared cuz 'Spaz out on a dash' & I pray u become a victim of road rage.

fraze · 11-29-2020, 01:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by iSpaz

You cock sucka. I'm like blockbusta in its prime with the mag gripped
Thinkin you can go blow for blow with me but I aint down with that fag shit
don't like the wording in the punch.
Hate the kid. This beta bitch only frontin online thats ad hoc
You prolly readin this verse as aggressive as if I pressed caps lock
straightforward. light
Back from vacay. You were great in ur heyday but what you had is far
You tried graspin a power line nd then shocked us all with how bad you are
ok concept. still kinda light
Outfit crispy. Cashmere cuz it fits me you must be tweakin on a limb
Yeah I'll beat Fresh to death and the drip is just blood leakin outta him
this is ok
I'll take ur wife. Show her the life nd then the pump break ya in two
1 shot'll have the steel ring around my finger.. after I take it from you
don't like this

Quotes: Fresh to death
close: power line

Ok verse, most of the misses were from picking concepts that aren't very strong disses. Saying he's reading the verse as aggressive isn't much of a put down, concepts like that are hard to make hit.

Quote:

Originally Posted by JaysonFresh

hands around ya neck nigga i gotta tight hold grip
Percocet? Naah. Spaz searching for an entire bottle like u cant hold it in long enuff ona road trip.
there is a flip there but it's light
fresh the type to crush ya spine while u screaaam stop
when Im done u'll need somethin' to prop ya neck up like airport souvenir shops
too direct for me
& Im pickin off every member of his fam when the gun cock
brrrrrat..every body 'count doubles' ..10 sec left on Pop-a-Shot
ok concept. wording is a little off
uppercut alone'll make u extremely nauseous
rearrange ya jaw, when ya mouth waters for food it turns to a leaky faucet
ok imagery, punch is too simple for me
gotchu targeted, sniper scope in close range
must be scared cuz 'Spaz out on a dash' & I pray u become a victim of road rage.
wording is off. concept is ok

Quotes: n/a
Close: Pop-a-shot, road rage

Didn't have any quotes from you but you still had some cool concepts. Keep working on your wording. This battle would have been closer if you had worded your punches to hit b/c the concepts aren't bad.

Vote: iSpaz close battle but Spaz edges this with 'Fresh to death'. it's probably a little played, but the drip tie in was cool and it was well worded.

11-26-2020, 04:30 PM	#1
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161234	You cock sucka. I'm like blockbusta in its prime with the mag gripped Thinkin you can go blow for blow with me but I aint down with that fag shit Hate the kid. This beta bitch only frontin online thats ad hoc You prolly readin this verse as aggressive as if I pressed caps lock Back from vacay. You were great in ur heyday but what you had is far You tried graspin a power line nd then shocked us all with how bad you are Outfit crispy. Cashmere cuz it fits me you must be tweakin on a limb Yeah I'll beat Fresh to death and the drip is just blood leakin outta him I'll take ur wife. Show her the life nd then the pump break ya in two 1 shot'll have the steel ring around my finger.. after I take it from you __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw Last edited by iSpaz; 11-28-2020 at 03:10 PM.

11-28-2020, 04:52 PM	#2
JaysonFresh Member Join Date: Jun 2019 Posts: 45 Battle Record: 3-5 Rep Power: 263275	get him some pain killers quick key yo, hands around ya neck nigga i gotta tight hold grip Percocet? Naah. Spaz searching for an entire bottle like u cant hold it in long enuff ona road trip. fresh the type to crush ya spine while u screaaam stop when Im done u'll need somethin' to prop ya neck up like airport souvenir shops & Im pickin off every member of his fam when the gun cock brrrrrat..every body 'count doubles' ..10 sec left on Pop-a-Shot uppercut alone'll make u extremely nauseous rearrange ya jaw, when ya mouth waters for food it turns to a leaky faucet gotchu targeted, sniper scope in close range must be scared cuz 'Spaz out on a dash' & I pray u become a victim of road rage. Last edited by JaysonFresh; 11-28-2020 at 05:27 PM.