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02-29-2016, 12:33 PM
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Enki & Enlil (Evis & Chyeahhh)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QjbHGe161Vs
Eviscerate i'm God Sun, allow me to employ the resemblance square-off with a sentence masons observe the perfect points of my entrance. 6 neutrons 6 electrons 6 protons not the beast, that's the melanin code i just spoke on. peep it, burried be the secret knowledge, i speak it demolish Phoenecians harnessing powers of Egypt. slaying all with forked tounge, that's my recollection rule with a rod of iron used for Correction not protection. take a sip of vervain offer, Dr. Sebi is my doctor purslane, iron in my veins, brain is made of copper the walking hexagon, carbon being, 99 elements alkaline analyst shitting ash and volcanic sediments. young god with a gift, been like this since 1996 rose up from the slums with the mind of a scientist. observin the world around me rotting at a rapid pace duckin magistrates, fuckas tryina create a master race. tv displays the shit, as we fire off into space with ships i sit, blaze a spliff n read the chronicles of Operation Paperclip.. Chyeahhh!!! it’s the social conscious that’ll leave you unconscious Ya simple entendres leave me undaunted televised revolution, I'm Chris rock at the Oscars plus I practice Krav Maga on a bed of hot Lava My focus is on optics! a moment for my sponsors Eotech with the zoom lense that should’ve been an option on Contra The flow is on bonkers The best when I’m slick but to catch what I mitt u gotta be Gary Payton with a gauntlet Ya’ll should be glad I’m tryna balance all my chakras Cuz I’d show up with gloves and a mask like Phantom of the Opera Tony Danza with stanzas, but Imma boss outside the margins My quatrains got me feeling like the Nostradamus of my genre A Law Abiding Citizen who aint plottin to blow up the congress But I’d cast my vote for a carcass before I voted in the caucus you should all be feelin nauseous yah girl will make u her X man and come home with me when the Apocalypse is upon us
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02-29-2016, 04:53 PM
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'i'm God Sun, allow me to employ the resemblance
square-off with a sentence masons observe the perfect points of my entrance. 6 neutrons 6 electrons 6 protons not the beast, that's the melanin code i just spoke" ill ill ill scheme. nice from Evis. "Ya’ll should be glad I’m tryna balance all my chakras Cuz I’d show up with gloves and a mask like Phantom of the Opera Tony Danza with stanzas, but Imma boss outside the margins My quatrains got me feeling like the Nostradamus of my genre" this hit for me from Cheeyah!! i don't really keep up enough to catch all the topical name shit tho, that's on me. Stay up. It was really easy for me to rap this to the beat and catch the flow. |
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02-29-2016, 08:09 PM
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my mynd got eviscerated
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03-01-2016, 11:45 AM
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The Clown Prince
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Evis...been awhile since I seen a verse of yours floating about around here...
this verse was refreshing you litter the verse with a couple witty one liners but then I come across this peep it, burried be the secret knowledge, i speak it demolish Phoenecians harnessing powers of Egypt. the walking hexagon, carbon being, 99 elements alkaline analyst shitting ash and volcanic sediments. ^^^ Those 2 points really stand out to me, they just come across so smooth. especially the latter, you never see anyone take a step beyond simpler ideas I feel like you shine in this collab & shows that you still have a particular set of skills dope work here... it’s the social conscious that’ll leave you unconscious Ya simple entendres leave me undaunted televised revolution, I'm Chris rock at the Oscars plus I practice Krav Maga on a bed of hot Lava ^^ CHHHYYEEAAAHHH...I love that shit, thats just a dope opener following Evis verse reminds me of some Wu Tang type ish here, really nice work following that scheme of yours Im surprised you get slept on as a writer it may be due to your discussion threads & battles but when you sit down and write a verse like this you showcase your versatility some braggadocio knowledge dropping pen work....nice shit overall this was a dope collab, I really enjoy how the blend of styles work together you both shine in your own way & it makes the read quick but memorable. nice work fellas
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03-01-2016, 04:26 PM
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03-02-2016, 03:31 PM
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Saul Paul
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word thanx for the feed ya'll
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KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff |
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03-09-2016, 02:11 PM
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Amazing & Terrific
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03-14-2016, 11:46 PM
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This shit was live
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03-15-2016, 12:45 AM
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rhyme capsule.
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'vis got chyea on this one
shit was on point either end though. |
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03-15-2016, 05:44 AM
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Shrewd as evearthed
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i fucks with that phantom of the opera bar heavy yo
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11-04-2020, 12:51 AM
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My turn :)
Exterminate I'm a demonic entity, let me express your demise Glaring behind a Devilish devise Quenching the eyes of heavenly vice to Perfectly Wise Guy C.O./Geico, Progressive/pro G rest I.V., Northon Something Massive rotten by god forgotten, I'm flying Cotton Dark gas's entrapped, In auras, An excellent Carcass, Merging Messiah's aligning the Charkras behind Malevolent Mantras Preying serpent wrapping humans, its an Obsession A Segregation, for the Planet's eradication not Salvation Oh Redemption Quenching the soul with fresh plasma, Satan a Sailor Dying Wailer, Shattering remainder, Trail by a Sacred Tailor The binding Megatron, Pestilence, with more than 90 Regiments Mutated creature with Sentiments escaping Shady Satanic Experiments Blessed hologram Divinely made to hypnotize, Since Birth Wine thats been aging, Day by Day I synthesize to split Earth Before it burns in the masses to Templar Knights I return with glasses to Shred your Lights See you blasting lead outlasting Secular Fights
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11-23-2020, 10:22 PM
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Saul Paul
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to God be the glory, all praises and honors
shoulda gotten advice before you did this, they'd all say that you're goner shame on you for tryna to flex against this exorcist who's heaven sent sniping with alchemy from a balcony, typa smith N' iron you shouldn't mix or metal with put a skull clamp on your Temple... of Set, you're the simplest of threats Michael Aquino died and this is how you resolve your issues, I guess*shrugs* you performing candle lit rituals with other men in the dark and blood on the walls envoking entities talkin bout, "please come inside me" nah, none of that sounds funny at all ya style is all "insert random occultist reference here, smart sounding book quote goes there" sounds super ficial, only thing missing is the yellow cape, spandex, and the Space Ghost stare soon as you blink I'mma snatch ya, have yah fam thinking your raptured looking for validity online and got it all wrong, please re-enter your captcha the GOAT had to come do battle with baphomet, no go start seeking God Jesus game me power reduce demons to a fraction, because possession is 9/10's of the law
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I’m not gonna lie. There was a time where the whole Anunnaki, Zacharias Hitchens, and Malachi York stuff seemed mildly plausible, yet wildly fascinating. Fortunately, at least, I’d like to think, that I’m on a completely different level of innerstanding nowadays. But ehhh. Maybe not.
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Dope shit overall. You both made it look too easy.
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11-26-2020, 02:08 PM
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NJ Devil
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Evic killed this shit
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