WEEK TWO: PHARAOHS ARMY 0-1 vs SINACOG 0-0 PHARAOHS ARMY WINS

Candy · 11-24-2020, 04:11 AM

sinacog:
was a pretty cool verse and the demons and dreams was pretty cool it the the story its was pretty cool you took alot of stabs at it was smooth in general.. a little diddy cool none the less..

pharoh army:
def cooler because the story was more planned out and the lines was lengthy in a good way with some interesting the vocab the bar structure was cool rhythm the line length was tight with internals in the way of that they just fit in perfect..

vote = paroah army

it was just an all round better verse with lengthy lines for more substance thanks guys good luck

11-24-2020, 04:11 AM	#13
Candy Sell Her Join Date: Feb 2018 Posts: 1,075 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 8518432	sinacog: was a pretty cool verse and the demons and dreams was pretty cool it the the story its was pretty cool you took alot of stabs at it was smooth in general.. a little diddy cool none the less.. pharoh army: def cooler because the story was more planned out and the lines was lengthy in a good way with some interesting the vocab the bar structure was cool rhythm the line length was tight with internals in the way of that they just fit in perfect.. vote = paroah army it was just an all round better verse with lengthy lines for more substance thanks guys good luck __________________ curious más curioso y más curioso