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11-16-2020, 03:30 PM
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Objective, nice style, colorful rhyme scheme, it reads rhythmically. At first I was thinking you got this. So I went ahead and read both verses three times to remove doubt and Universe slightly edged this one out. The story read like a perplexed mystery, that had my wondering, "what in the world?", "does this even make sense?", "what wrong with this person?". It was like a twisted episode of black mirror without the tech. Madd props to both of you.
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