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WEEK 7: Hotdogvendorman 2-0 VS Scout 2-0 SCOUT WINS
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Rules Line limit Minimum: 10 Maximum: 16 Verses due 11:59pm EST November 19, 2020 (Thursday) Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE Good luck, gentlemen
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11-15-2020, 05:47 PM
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Jeice! Who's that?
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11-15-2020, 09:22 PM
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11-16-2020, 12:15 AM
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Heard you fat as fuckkk @hotdogvendorman
Aka Deon Sup I just saw the bronze bomber tuned up by some gypsy .. Deontay's tests have been huge...3 buffets, 2 food trucks in 1 sitting Only guilty of not showing, fans'd say this man had a clean run... It's hard to shoot yourself in the foot when you can't even see one Bet the thought of my shank inside your skull is pretty stressful.. Blade swarming. Mormon skateboarding..I'll shove-It in ya temple They call me barc like they know me. It's totally strange If I'm selling wolf tickets, your whole act is a coyote with mange I copped a big chain for 13g. To mimic, you need green first If U rock a big chain, burger king has been giving you free t shirts Can't hide 400 lbs. so this is a body that I'm NOT covering up If ya untraceable, it's because a whole pack of chalk wasn't enough Never at large. Just large... Claim to be hard but you off the $ Your last mugshot was a mix of ketchup, barbeque sauce and honey Type to say nothing when your father was molesting your sister You only took sides if someone was not paying attention at dinner Got thumbnails of ya wife going down, it's how I treat my phone Ur thumbnails include batter & bits of brownie downed a week ago I'm exposing bowels when bullets collide with that ass, kid Irony'll be shitting out shards before you're put in a fiberglass casket 20 GL Last edited by Scout; 11-18-2020 at 11:58 AM. |
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11-17-2020, 05:10 PM
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Quick work..
. . . Kids another alias tryna spar w/ a great.. Thought you were cro/bar so I'm using 1 to pry ur jaw off ya face.. I don't just walk into battles w/o scoping around.. I Use the choppa to 'Scout the landscape' by leaving you in pieces all over the ground.. Funny U asked for this match... I'll leave ya faculty bothered.. ..Zuch set you up for failure worse than a drunk mom & absentee father.. & Even ur chick is telling you man up.. Said I'm better by 'leaps & bounds' then jumped in my bed w the handcuffs.. See I was tryna hit w minimal time spent.. My dick had maaad interest & her camel toe sealed the deal w that 'fine print'.. My niggas Rollin 60 Crip & imbeded in the streets.. If you rollin 60 its like Zuch vs Blue except no1s EVER gonna read.. So how you figure you maneuvering enough to test me G?.. One uppercut'll 'send Scout South' like he's recruiting for the SEC.. U & ur boys ain't nowhere near a thugs route.. Ur a goofy & them niggas rats like the Mickey Mouse Clubhouse.. Ya prose so trash w no flow and swag.. How tf you up the ante Scout just to fold so fast ?.. Get checked for disrespect when the heats on aim.. Shots'll make you stay in ur lane w holes in ya top like a skeeball game.. Pz
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11-18-2020, 10:05 PM
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I just saw the bronze bomber tuned up by some gypsy .. Deontay's tests have been huge...3 buffets, 2 food trucks in 1 sitting Just saw? Lil late but kinda funny. Shitty rhyme though Only guilty of not showing, fans'd say this man had a clean run... It's hard to shoot yourself in the foot when you can't even see one I lol'd Bet the thought of my shank inside your skull is pretty stressful.. Blade swarming. Mormon skateboarding..I'll shove-It in ya temple Wasn't feelin this one They call me barc like they know me. It's totally strange If I'm selling wolf tickets, your whole act is a coyote with mange Decent, points for the creativity I copped a big chain for 13g. To mimic, you need green first If U rock a big chain, burger king has been giving you free t shirts Its.... ok... Can't hide 400 lbs. so this is a body that I'm NOT covering up If ya untraceable, it's because a whole pack of chalk wasn't enough Better than the last bar Never at large. Just large... Claim to be hard but you off the $ Your last mugshot was a mix of ketchup, barbeque sauce and honey I lol'd again Type to say nothing when your father was molesting your sister You only took sides if someone was not paying attention at dinner Probably my fav bar so far but it's starting to feel like everything a fat joke Got thumbnails of ya wife going down, it's how I treat my phone Ur thumbnails include batter & bits of brownie downed a week ago Too similar to the mugshot bar. You prolly wrote them at the same time huh I'm exposing bowels when bullets collide with that ass, kid Irony'll be shitting out shards before you're put in a fiberglass casket So-so closer You shoulda went 12. Shoot the foot, wolf tickets, mugshot, pay attention were good. The fat jokes eventually got repetitive, and I wasn't really feeling the others. Solid showing though, I don't lol a lot. 7/10 VS HDVM Kids another alias tryna spar w/ a great.. Thought you were cro/bar so I'm using 1 to pry ur jaw off ya face.. Not my preferred type of bar. Almost a throwaway I don't just walk into battles w/o scoping around.. I Use the choppa to 'Scout the landscape' by leaving you in pieces all over the ground.. High quality gun bar. Shoulda been the opener Funny U asked for this match... I'll leave ya faculty bothered.. ..Zuch set you up for failure worse than a drunk mom & absentee father.. 'your drunk ___' instead of 'a drunk ___' woulda made it harsher. More braggadocio than a diss without it & Even ur chick is telling you man up.. Said I'm better by 'leaps & bounds' then jumped in my bed w the handcuffs.. Avg 'fucked your girl' bar See I was tryna hit w minimal time spent.. My dick had maaad interest & her camel toe sealed the deal w that 'fine print'.. Swaggy but not a harsh diss My niggas Rollin 60 Crip & imbeded in the streets.. If you rollin 60 its like Zuch vs Blue except no1s EVER gonna read.. Ok So how you figure you maneuvering enough to test me G?.. One uppercut'll 'send Scout South' like he's recruiting for the SEC.. Basic but ok U & ur boys ain't nowhere near a thugs route.. Ur a goofy & them niggas rats like the Mickey Mouse Clubhouse.. Its like you're keyin at this point Ya prose so trash w no flow and swag.. How tf you up the ante Scout just to fold so fast ?.. Definitely keyin Get checked for disrespect when the heats on aim.. Shots'll make you stay in ur lane w holes in ya top like a skeeball game.. Creative, but not as good of a gun bar as your other one I feel it's clear you put some effort in the first half of your verse- it's leaps and bounds better than the second half in terms of quality. Spittin your shit out loud its fire, sounds dope to a beat n shit. But when i analyzed it bar for bar, it's well written, but it didn't truly attack dude like what I'm looking for, conceptually. Specifically the opener, leaps & bounds, fine print, and the last couple bars. 6/10 Only guilty of not showing, fans'd say this man had a clean run... It's hard to shoot yourself in the foot when you can't even see one Type to say nothing when your father was molesting your sister You only took sides if someone was not paying attention at dinner VS I don't just walk into battles w/o scoping around.. I Use the choppa to 'Scout the landscape' by leaving you in pieces all over the ground.. Vote: Scout |
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11-19-2020, 09:23 AM
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Shoot urself in foot
Took sides was lol Untraceable (Those two bars were cool.. the rest didn't hit for me... The fat jokes got played out to... Change it up) Vs Landscape Zuch vs blue (mild tho..barely quoted) Skeeball game was okish ..this battle is a tough call... All the first dude had was fat jokes with a few that hit okay and the second dude had alot of attempts but they weren't delivered right to supply sting... Alot of it fell flat.. seemed like a quick key... Imma give the win to scout for the sides line Vote scout ... hotdog just lacked the sting in most bars... Seemed like a quick written
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11-19-2020, 11:56 AM
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Scout the landscape was cool Leaps and bounds, nice Set you up for failure was decent Scout Shoot yourself in the foot ok Wolf tickets dope Took sides dope Untraceable cool Mugshot funny Thumbnails funny (although the last two weren’t the hardest imo) I liked hdvm’s verse in parts and dug the wording. Had a fair few I wasn’t feeling though.. Scout was good too but similar in that the whole verse was fat joke based which bugs me.. fairly close.. ehh I gotta go for Scout overall was just feeling the read more Vote scout Last edited by Wanderer; 11-19-2020 at 12:56 PM. Reason: Missed a punch |
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11-19-2020, 12:24 PM
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Shoot your self in the foot was dope, but I seen concepts like that before, I also feel like you’re spamming the fat bars too much. Wolf tickets was slick I like the way that bar was set up. @Hotdog Pry your jaw of your face was cool. Other than that, I think scout is guilty of spamming fat bars, and hotdog had more old concepts than scout, I think the wolf tickets bar from scout was creative enough to win this one. |
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11-19-2020, 12:53 PM
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Scout - Coyote with mange was clever but I dont quite get what you're implying... big chain was cool... chalk wasnt enough was good... took sides was funny lol and clever but the fat jokes are a lot at this point....
Hotdog - leaps and bounds was good... fine print lol kinda dumb though...rollin 60s was really good... scout south was alright... Mickey mouse good rats I like... skeeball was pretty coool... started slow but got hot Hotdog wins here. The fat jokes got old. About the same level of enjoyment but hotdog has the better verse.
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11-19-2020, 06:45 PM
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I just saw the bronze bomber tuned up by some gypsy ..
Deontay's tests have been huge...3 buffets, 2 food trucks in 1 sitting Only guilty of not showing, fans'd say this man had a clean run... It's hard to shoot yourself in the foot when you can't even see one Can't hide 400 lbs. so this is a body that I'm NOT covering up If ya untraceable, it's because a whole pack of chalk wasn't enough Never at large. Just large... Claim to be hard but you off the $ Your last mugshot was a mix of ketchup, barbeque sauce and honey Type to say nothing when your father was molesting your sister You only took sides if someone was not paying attention at dinner Got thumbnails of ya wife going down, it's how I treat my phone Ur thumbnails include batter & bits of brownie downed a week ago vs Kids another alias tryna spar w/ a great.. Thought you were cro/bar so I'm using 1 to pry ur jaw off ya face.. My niggas Rollin 60 Crip & imbeded in the streets.. If you rollin 60 its like Zuch vs Blue except no1s EVER gonna read.. So how you figure you maneuvering enough to test me G?.. One uppercut'll 'send Scout South' like he's recruiting for the SEC.. U & ur boys ain't nowhere near a thugs route.. Ur a goofy & them niggas rats like the Mickey Mouse Clubhouse.. Get checked for disrespect when the heats on aim.. Shots'll make you stay in ur lane w holes in ya top like a skeeball game.. cool battle. v/scout barely. idk if i dig fat jokes over nd over, but they were still legit bars. hotdog had some dope bars but not enough this time.
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Hotdogvendorman - set up for failure was good. Opener, mickey mouse clubhouse and closer are ok. Have seen better from you, this is probably just an off week. Vote: Scout - Deon had some lines but Scout had the better verse overall. |
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11-20-2020, 03:12 PM
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This was really close. I liked hotdog’s wording and swagger a fair amount more than Scout’s. Hotdog also had less stretched concepts that fell flat. But, Hotdog also closed soft.. his last 6 weren’t nearly as good as his verse before that.
Scouts shoot yourself in the foot, coyote with mange, and a couple others were solid concepts... but there was also forced stuff and I’m not a fan of wordplay unless it’s really well done and worded perfectly. In a close one, I think Hotdog won. Cool read.
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11-21-2020, 11:04 AM
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11-22-2020, 01:02 PM
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Spoiled brat
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HVM normally coming with some heat but this one seems a bit rushed. Definitely some bars toward the end that were worded nice but were jut filler.
Scout came pretty nice. Couple bangers and the rest was decent. Enough to win. Good battle. Vote Scout
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Vote goes to scout
Hotdog had the openener, landscape and leaps and bounds were gas Scout Cant see foot, rock a chain, not traceable Not traceable is lotb and his misses werent as missy Good job to both
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