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Old 11-12-2020, 05:31 AM   #7
Wanderer
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[B]Ajax[B]

With me, every verse is insane…
While you leave crowds ‘less riveted’ than the Aviator’s personal plane.
Even on NC, you don’t have enough boys to win…
Everyone hates me and I’ll still beat you ‘ten fold’ like Destroyer’s chin.
Against me, you’ll end like you caught a disease…
People from all ‘walks of life’ look down on you. After I hobble your knees.
Rivals quake when I talk… All time; I’m adjacent to Pac.
I make money ‘hand over fist.’ You throw all your paper on rock.
This bum’s an immaculate slob…
In the company of greatness… the closest you’ll ever come to having a job.

Solid verse and these were all cool to me. More than enough for you to win

Eviction

I’m not gonna quote anything bro but you had some ideas and some of the Multis were strong, just nothing that made me think ‘wow’ y’know. I echo Dave Your execution lacked and the bars were too wordy. This isn’t to say you can’t step your game up for next week. Looking forward to seeing what you can do.

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