WEEK 4: Wanderer 2-1 VS Mod of War 1-0 WANDERER WINS

UPN Zuch · 10-24-2020, 11:22 AM

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Smod of War · 10-24-2020, 11:26 AM

Hey let’s do 10

Wanderer · 10-24-2020, 02:15 PM

Sure

Smod of War · 10-24-2020, 02:35 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wanderer

Sure

Ayy boss how you feel about dropping today?

Wanderer · 10-24-2020, 05:06 PM

Sent 12

Smod of War · 10-29-2020, 01:20 PM

PREPARE TO DIE

Isle end this! no expiration date. Wait till u see where this gooks headed
He’s so used to the taste of defeat he developed a foot fetish
I could drop straight trash. Literally a dud of a verse and I’m good
Cuz when it comes to beef in this battle I already knw u bratwurst than I would
And your girl? Likes to nibble, s’cool.. I’m just glad she’s not a biter
A Nice broad, says she’s into innocence.. kinda weird she likes the smell of topical writers
KAPOW! I hate foreigners. Best believe I’ll leave you dead mate
I pack pistols.. my grain is 147, it’ll give you more than a headache!
This is straight murder, it’s no secret I’m killin em
The verse will either be gunbars or just dead funny like Robin Williams
Death by aerial assault. Fuck around n get aired
This nerd wasn’t ready but I’m sure he had his Bluetooth pre paired

Wanderer · 10-29-2020, 01:31 PM

Hey Zelph / Zaddy / Mod of War

Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled
LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles
Verses hitting hardly so u Clowning to think it harms me
I’m Ballooning... u in the bag with that shit nobody want like lil kids parties
A couple losses & u’ll ghost. War in ur name but u chicken shit, hell..
If they ever label u a Soldier it’s cos u’ll get Toasted then dip in ur Shell
Ur votes are atrocious. bitterness & hate’s what ur about
Learn to Brush it off properly to limit that bad taste in ur mouth
I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad
Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had
U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong
But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb

Orc · 10-30-2020, 10:42 AM

Zelph’s verse was garbage. Funny at times, but garbage

Wanderer - liked the opener, cool personal. I don’t get the Balloon bar man. Soldier bar was fire, the wording of the set up could have been tweaked to make the bar better. Brush was a weak connection to the punch imo. Name drop is fire and a good personal. Tripwire was filler.

Vote Wanderer

iSpaz · 10-30-2020, 02:33 PM

Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled
LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles
I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad
Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had

vs

idk if this was a serious verse or wut, after i read defeat/bratwurst lines.

v/wand

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO · 10-30-2020, 03:55 PM

Wanderer got this obviously

What the hell zelph?

Mod of war and alias lines were cool

Vote wanderer

UserName · 10-30-2020, 04:22 PM

Wand, you didnt need much but these were tight:

Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled
LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles
I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad
Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had
U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong
But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb

Zelph i hate you

V - Wand

Destroyer · 10-31-2020, 09:31 AM

Defeat? Gtfo

V/wanderer

Aero · 11-01-2020, 05:03 AM

Mod - bratwurst was good and bad for me lol... KAPOW!! LOL no gangster has ever said Kapow

Wand - outcomebof battles and failing under alias

Wand wins here. Mod was decent just wasnt there conceptually

Bomb Bard · 11-01-2020, 09:15 AM

Wow a defeat bar? Fuckin plug

V/wanderer.

evaD · 11-01-2020, 11:53 AM

Overstep line and name drop were fire concepts. Opener was a nice name play too. Solid verse from Wand. Kid was kinda funny but not good.

Vote - wand

Blue Bayou · 11-01-2020, 12:04 PM

LMAO at Zelph's troll verse... defeat oper, inno scents lol wow

vs.

Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled
LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles
good punch, nice personal touch in the setup... youve already won
Verses hitting hardly so u Clowning to think it harms me
I’m Ballooning... u in the bag with that shit nobody want like lil kids parties
ehh okay conceptually, smoother connecting multis would help the wording and delivery
A couple losses & u’ll ghost. War in ur name but u chicken shit, hell..
If they ever label u a Soldier it’s cos u’ll get Toasted then dip in ur Shell
some coolish connections throughout but its just okay
Ur votes are atrocious. bitterness & hate’s what ur about
Learn to Brush it off properly to limit that bad taste in ur mouth
fresh concept and good personal as hes a vote troll
I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad
Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had
good hit
U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong
But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb
nice concept but i think this shouldve been done differently.. overstep the line "with me" takes away from the impact and makes it less smooth

Zelph made me laugh as he intended to, but Wand won easily with a good mix of solid concepts and personals..

Adverse · 11-01-2020, 12:47 PM

I Like Zelph, but this verse didn’t have much bratwurst was okay defeat is tired tbh

Wand had failing under aliases, change the outcome and soldier had potential. Your verse wasn’t a knockout punch but it had some good bars.

V/Wand pretty one sided

10-24-2020, 05:06 PM	#5
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 589 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457541	Sent 12 Last edited by Wanderer; 10-25-2020 at 08:22 AM.

10-29-2020, 01:20 PM	#6
Smod of War My avatar is a man, urGAY Join Date: Aug 2018 Posts: 373 Battle Record: 2-5 Rep Power: 1718007	PREPARE TO DIE Isle end this! no expiration date. Wait till u see where this gooks headed He’s so used to the taste of defeat he developed a foot fetish I could drop straight trash. Literally a dud of a verse and I’m good Cuz when it comes to beef in this battle I already knw u bratwurst than I would And your girl? Likes to nibble, s’cool.. I’m just glad she’s not a biter A Nice broad, says she’s into innocence.. kinda weird she likes the smell of topical writers KAPOW! I hate foreigners. Best believe I’ll leave you dead mate I pack pistols.. my grain is 147, it’ll give you more than a headache! This is straight murder, it’s no secret I’m killin em The verse will either be gunbars or just dead funny like Robin Williams Death by aerial assault. Fuck around n get aired This nerd wasn’t ready but I’m sure he had his Bluetooth pre paired Last edited by Smod of War; 10-29-2020 at 05:16 PM.

10-30-2020, 02:33 PM	#9
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161234	Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had vs idk if this was a serious verse or wut, after i read defeat/bratwurst lines. v/wand __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

10-30-2020, 03:55 PM	#10
TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO I <3 girls an good at sex Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 149 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 132754	Wanderer got this obviously What the hell zelph? Mod of war and alias lines were cool Vote wanderer __________________ They think I’m dope and I Cedar Point

10-30-2020, 04:22 PM	#11
UserName K I N G Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 685 Battle Record: 15-10 Rep Power: 3228865	Wand, you didnt need much but these were tight: Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb Zelph i hate you V - Wand __________________ First Class

10-24-2020, 11:26 AM	#2
Smod of War My avatar is a man, urGAY Join Date: Aug 2018 Posts: 373 Battle Record: 2-5 Rep Power: 1718007	Hey let’s do 10

10-24-2020, 02:15 PM	#3
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 589 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457541	Sure

10-29-2020, 01:31 PM	#7
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 589 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457541	Hey Zelph / Zaddy / Mod of War Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles Verses hitting hardly so u Clowning to think it harms me I’m Ballooning... u in the bag with that shit nobody want like lil kids parties A couple losses & u’ll ghost. War in ur name but u chicken shit, hell.. If they ever label u a Soldier it’s cos u’ll get Toasted then dip in ur Shell Ur votes are atrocious. bitterness & hate’s what ur about Learn to Brush it off properly to limit that bad taste in ur mouth I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb

10-30-2020, 10:42 AM	#8
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	Zelph’s verse was garbage. Funny at times, but garbage Wanderer - liked the opener, cool personal. I don’t get the Balloon bar man. Soldier bar was fire, the wording of the set up could have been tweaked to make the bar better. Brush was a weak connection to the punch imo. Name drop is fire and a good personal. Tripwire was filler. Vote Wanderer

11-01-2020, 05:03 AM	#13
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,826 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Mod - bratwurst was good and bad for me lol... KAPOW!! LOL no gangster has ever said Kapow Wand - outcomebof battles and failing under alias Wand wins here. Mod was decent just wasnt there conceptually __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

11-01-2020, 11:53 AM	#15
evaD Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 695 Battle Record: 19-10 Champed - BA Show And Prove - Summer Classic XI Rep Power: 4156647	Overstep line and name drop were fire concepts. Opener was a nice name play too. Solid verse from Wand. Kid was kinda funny but not good. Vote - wand __________________

11-01-2020, 12:04 PM	#16
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,098 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502335	LMAO at Zelph's troll verse... defeat oper, inno scents lol wow vs. Beat u pics AND regs so there’s no doubting that ur rattled LOL @ Mod of War.. u still can’t change the outcome of our battles good punch, nice personal touch in the setup... youve already won Verses hitting hardly so u Clowning to think it harms me I’m Ballooning... u in the bag with that shit nobody want like lil kids parties ehh okay conceptually, smoother connecting multis would help the wording and delivery A couple losses & u’ll ghost. War in ur name but u chicken shit, hell.. If they ever label u a Soldier it’s cos u’ll get Toasted then dip in ur Shell some coolish connections throughout but its just okay Ur votes are atrocious. bitterness & hate’s what ur about Learn to Brush it off properly to limit that bad taste in ur mouth fresh concept and good personal as hes a vote troll I’m mentioned as a born winner. u don’t create that shit.. it’s sad Only thing u know about a name drop is failing under every alias u’ve had good hit U never explode into action so talking that shit is wrong But overstep the line with me EVER.. I’ll make sure it’s a tripwire bomb nice concept but i think this shouldve been done differently.. overstep the line "with me" takes away from the impact and makes it less smooth Zelph made me laugh as he intended to, but Wand won easily with a good mix of solid concepts and personals..

11-01-2020, 12:47 PM	#17
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	I Like Zelph, but this verse didn’t have much bratwurst was okay defeat is tired tbh Wand had failing under aliases, change the outcome and soldier had potential. Your verse wasn’t a knockout punch but it had some good bars. V/Wand pretty one sided