The Older Ode

[Adverse]

This was cool I liked your flow throughout had good multis and I loved the contrast from scenario to scenario this was a good ode to growing up

BUT

that last line almost ruined the whole piece, that was some Sinacog level shit, be better man

Other than that good work

[Shredder]

Originally Posted by Adverse

This was cool I liked your flow throughout had good multis and I loved the contrast from scenario to scenario this was a good ode to growing up

BUT

that last line almost ruined the whole piece, that was some Sinacog level shit, be better man

Other than that good work

I preciate you taking the time to feed, fam. multis, contrasting imagery and real shit subject matter some of my fav elements so its cool to know other people enjoy that too.