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10-29-2020, 10:03 AM
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low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
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I like the vivid descriptiveness in this piece. You built an awesome atmosphere
The setting is cool but we’re no stranger to apocalyptic settings, anyone who has been in a league here has undoubtedly wrote about this same subject a few times but I just like the vision you laid out “mutated fowls circle the red sky like starved demons could this really be hell” “ by the hands of fate, their presence was forged experiments, evolutionary codex, genetic codes malformed the primordial cycle, survival, reproduction laws of nature, extinction, inevitable repercussions” Good work man |
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