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10-01-2020, 11:02 PM
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WEEK 1: Spree vs Wanderer SPREE WINS
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Rules Line limit Minimum: 10 Maximum: 16 Verses due 11:59pm EST October 6, 2020 (Tuesday) Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE Good luck, gentlemen
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10-02-2020, 08:24 AM
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10-03-2020, 01:31 AM
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10-06-2020, 12:10 PM
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Already talked to wanderer I may need ext
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10-06-2020, 12:25 PM
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10-07-2020, 09:02 PM
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10-07-2020, 09:16 PM
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Wanderer verse:
fuck em & chuck em philosophy. No time for when a chick’s trippin I never had a Carmex... urs had to come my way just to get their lips glistened & all ur wack lines harmless. No fire to try n harness Making so many barriers for urself. U only dope creatively as a mime artist Ain’t care how safe u feel. Trust ur protection’s fucked It ain’t cos ur guard dog loves u that a nose to ur chin gon wet u up All ur shit light hitting & soft, man just don’t even try No sting. Get smoked for that sweet shit, I’m handling pests like Amazonian tribes Best pack up. get the fuck outta here fore’ imm’a see a fag dropped mac’ll blast. vacuum flask; u leaking in the bag when ur top’s half off
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10-08-2020, 11:38 AM
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Wand - mime artist was creative but light.. guard dog chin was cool... vacuum line was okay but I can see others loving it...
Spree - rescue is good nameplay... some of the references I dont know off hand Good battle. Good pairing. Idk who won
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10-08-2020, 04:16 PM
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In my eyes it comes down to :
& all ur wack lines harmless. No fire to try n harness Making so many barriers for urself. U only dope creatively as a mime artist Ain’t care how safe u feel. Trust ur protection’s fucked It ain’t cos ur guard dog loves u that a nose to ur chin gon wet u up Vs Bars Killed us ; all you wrote was lame & weak & that was Rescue to drop wack... but still save the league! We’ve seen ur pic... ur ghost white & you seem abused Scary how small ur head looks like the last scene of Beetlejuice Both had some uncharacteristic misses, y’all are usually more consistent. I’m going to edge it to Bomb personally just a little more ferocious imo V/Bomb |
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10-08-2020, 10:46 PM
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This was pretty bad but I think spree edged it out
Wand I guess I haven’t seen battle regularly before? Are you saying like I never had a car, Mex, like calling him Mexican? I dont think spree is Mexican. Also, then you refer to the girls, I think, though structurally you refer to the Carmex, like you had to borrow spree’s Carmex in order to put some on your lips? But no, cause it’s their lips that you are saying are glistened so anyway I’m confused and this is how I read your entire verse. Spree, rescue was nice. I’ll say that. The rest was like a long walk to get to an ice cream shop where the ice cream was just a bit too tiny, you know? Like almost enough ice cream, but just not. Anyway, vote spree and please for the love of god, get Corleone professional help or just kill him. Either way. Either way’s fine
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10-09-2020, 03:36 AM
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fuck em & chuck em philosophy. No time for when a chick’s trippin
I never had a Carmex... urs had to come my way just to get their lips glistened Had to google but this is nice & all ur wack lines harmless. No fire to try n harness Making so many barriers for urself. U only dope creatively as a mime artist Barriers for yourself as a concept a bit of a stretch Ain’t care how safe u feel. Trust ur protection’s fucked It ain’t cos ur guard dog loves u that a nose to ur chin gon wet u up This is fire All ur shit light hitting & soft, man just don’t even try No sting. Get smoked for that sweet shit, I’m handling pests like Amazonian tribes Ehh Best pack up. get the fuck outta here fore’ imm’a see a fag dropped mac’ll blast. vacuum flask; u leaking in the bag when ur top’s half off lol took me a minute to work this one out but it’s cool Wanderer aka Had alll NS wins to get to the NBL finals and Lose to Resin the Asian invader & according to that bracket?... I woulda beat Ad, You, & Cash w/o letting lead fly So first WK..1 Shell through ur head have ur lids squint more than Res Eyes Ok Bars Killed us ; all you wrote was lame & weak & that was Rescue to drop wack... but still save the league! Bar rescue? I don’t really get it We’ve seen ur pic... ur ghost white & you seem abused Scary how small ur head looks like the last scene of Beetlejuice Lmao Money? What you Owen’s Gray s’why this chump is hurt Punches? I got Small Hands! & always need another guy to help ur fuckin work! lol had to google this Choppa start @ the legs & work up till dude dead His kid’ll see 2 sticks hit below the hip like the finals pic of Zuch legs! Nice Put a spike in ur shoulda! Ya I’m bleedin this dude This Hawk’ll go Animal @ slam ur body into the earth... RIP LEGION OF DOOM Lol. This concept been done a lot tho I thought wand got these with more standouts and better wording/concepts Vote - wand ________________
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10-09-2020, 09:06 AM
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fuck em & chuck em philosophy. No time for when a chick’s trippin I never had a Carmex... urs had to come my way just to get their lips glistened - I know what Carmex is but it also has to work as Carm-ex, right? Or am I missing something? & all ur wack lines harmless. No fire to try n harness Making so many barriers for urself. U only dope creatively as a mime artist - or "you don't know what you're up against" works lol. But I liked this version too. Ain’t care how safe u feel. Trust ur protection’s fucked It ain’t cos ur guard dog loves u that a nose to ur chin gon wet u up - i mean I get it, but ehhh... All ur shit light hitting & soft, man just don’t even try No sting. Get smoked for that sweet shit, I’m handling pests like Amazonian tribes - You've been watching some History docs, haven't you? lol Best pack up. get the fuck outta here fore’ imm’a see a fag dropped mac’ll blast. vacuum flask; u leaking in the bag when ur top’s half off - dig the vacuum metaphor, sorta. It also kinda sucked at the same time... weird. Bomb Bard: & according to that bracket?... I woulda beat Ad, You, & Cash w/o letting lead fly So first WK..1 Shell through ur head have ur lids squint more than Res Eyes - Yeah... no. Bars Killed us ; all you wrote was lame & weak & that was Rescue to drop wack... but still save the league! - Res-cue to drop whack was cool. Like it. @evaD missed this one lol. We’ve seen ur pic... ur ghost white & you seem abused Scary how small ur head looks like the last scene of Beetlejuice - lol. It kinda does. Money? What you Owen’s Gray s’why this chump is hurt Punches? I got Small Hands! & always need another guy to help ur fuckin work! - just provide us with links for these references plz lol Choppa start @ the legs & work up till dude dead His kid’ll see 2 sticks hit below the hip like the finals pic of Zuch legs! - Too specific for my liking. You're assuming ppl see the things you do. Put a spike in ur shoulda! Ya I’m bleedin this dude This Hawk’ll go Animal @ slam ur body into the earth... RIP LEGION OF DOOM - Love Legion of Doom but not this bar. Close one fellas... But I'm going with Bomb Bard here for his wordplay and more focused personal attacks. Wanderer is the more naturally talented writer... but Bomb Bard tried harder for this one. Hard work beats talent when talent refuses to work hard. I think he caught Wand napping a little. Vote - Bomb Bard
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10-09-2020, 10:08 AM
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fuck em & chuck em philosophy. No time for when a chick’s trippin
I never had a Carmex... urs had to come my way just to get their lips glistened cool concept & all ur wack lines harmless. No fire to try n harness Making so many barriers for urself. U only dope creatively as a mime artist lol Ain’t care how safe u feel. Trust ur protection’s fucked It ain’t cos ur guard dog loves u that a nose to ur chin gon wet u up errr All ur shit light hitting & soft, man just don’t even try No sting. Get smoked for that sweet shit, I’m handling pests like Amazonian tribes lol Best pack up. get the fuck outta here fore’ imm’a see a fag dropped mac’ll blast. vacuum flask; u leaking in the bag when ur top’s half off cool.. approved cuz my name is on it vs. & according to that bracket?... I woulda beat Ad, You, & Cash w/o letting lead fly So first WK..1 Shell through ur head have ur lids squint more than Res Eyes okayish Bars Killed us ; all you wrote was lame & weak & that was Rescue to drop wack... but still save the league! not feeling this We’ve seen ur pic... ur ghost white & you seem abused Scary how small ur head looks like the last scene of Beetlejuice lol Money? What you Owen’s Gray s’why this chump is hurt Punches? I got Small Hands! & always need another guy to help ur fuckin work! okk Choppa start @ the legs & work up till dude dead His kid’ll see 2 sticks hit below the hip like the finals pic of Zuch legs! loll Put a spike in ur shoulda! Ya I’m bleedin this dude This Hawk’ll go Animal @ slam ur body into the earth... RIP LEGION OF DOOM lol this could go either way.. and its a problem cuz spree has 1 more bar and he had 1 more hit.. so I'm going with him here.. wanderer did good but I feel like hes switching styles too much v/spree |
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10-09-2020, 11:34 AM
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I liked the mime artist and your closer was nice too. Everything else was not to your usual standards. Week 1 though. Looking forward to your other shit. Spree Verse was alright. Beetle juice and Zuch legs was cool. Your misses were slightly better than wands but this was really close. You edged the W. Vote Spree
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