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DOHpe since 02'
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Surrounded by white ppl
Posts: 14,690
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Dave .
Opener was ok but came off a bit unwieldy for me. The wording Left swipes is ok Clean n jerked was ass Lollipop was cool but implying someone is weak to lift up a lollipop kindacornu to me . I like the concept tho . Ok V neck ok Yeesys was a banger tho Conceptually the chinos line was eh but the wording was masterful . Really drove that one . Not great but a good bar Sweep / resemble a broom . Eww. Ancient Zuchie Opener was an interesting observation . I can kinda see it lmso . Effective open Alpha dog . I don’t even remember enough to care . One of those things where one of your audience members barely remembers your reference . It happens . Someone else will understand it General Electric was dumb but it works . His shit do look like a hell lol . Ok .. Right nostril was a no . Just underwhelming Colt LMAOOOO here we go Last 4 were .. hmm . 56 k was ok But closer was a regular degulsr observation n not even a clever one Hold up Yeah according to my breakdown 2 quotes each 3 oks for Dave 2 for Zuch ? I got Dave by the tiniest margin V/ Dave
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Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople Last edited by El Muffin; 09-25-2020 at 05:56 PM. |
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