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Just rapped this.
Beginning is better than the end. You already used stolen parliments in a previous verse. Other than that, the content is pretty good. Don't have to delete it |
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rhyme capsule.
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lol
we were 12 and a half. making castles in sand now we're 21 and living in a Heineken can talking fast, frantic energy and stereo bass spirits in our flask to keep them spirits away this i particularly liked. appreciate the play on spirit - i don't think the nomenclature is accidental. solid overall. Last edited by Eŋg; 08-29-2020 at 09:08 AM. |
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