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Old 08-29-2020, 12:22 AM   #1
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Just rapped this.
Beginning is better than the end.

You already used stolen parliments in a previous verse.
Other than that, the content is pretty good.

Don't have to delete it
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Old 08-29-2020, 09:05 AM   #2
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Just rapped this.
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we were 12 and a half. making castles in sand
now we're 21 and living in a Heineken can
talking fast, frantic energy and stereo bass
spirits in our flask to keep them spirits away


this i particularly liked. appreciate the play on spirit - i don't think the nomenclature is accidental. solid overall.

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