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08-20-2020, 11:47 AM
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low tide in serotonin bay
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 2,752
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Only part I thought was out of place was inserting yourself into the piece, that bar was kind of outlandish but everything else worked imo and was narrated well, don't think you give yourself enough credit as a storyteller bro
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